This is my first official fanfiction so tell me what to fix :D

I used to be a janitor until I got fired yesterday, the reason why I got fired is because I kept checking in about 20 minutes late every day.

so I told my parents that I lost my job they got extremely pissed and said I had to go find a job instantly or else I will get kicked out of the basement.( i was only 18 and I couldn't afford a house yet.) So I went outside and tried to think of what job to do. After an hour of thinking, I still couldn't think of anything so I went and tried to look for the closest newspaper machine. About 15 minutes later of searching I finally found one. I checked my pockets and had one-quarter.

"This better be it," I said as I slid the quarter in.

I opened the top grabbed the daily paper and sat down searching for a new job.

"No, no, no" as I said dragging my finger across the "job wanted" section. "This is a good one." a lady said scooting up next to me on a bench that I was sitting on. "My son used to work there," she said with excitement. "Pshh, Freddy's pizzeria that place is for kids." as I stated while rolling my eyes.

"Oh he didn't work with the kids he was the old night guard, well he was until he went missing." she said with a sad looking smile.

"Oh, I'm sorry about your son," I say as I started walking home.

"Hmm maybe i will work there I mean i already sleep the whole day and it doesn't seem like it's too much of a workout, all you have to do is sit eat some doughnuts and watch through some old cameras, ya and who would even want to break into a children's restaurant."-

"A CREEP.," my friend said as he walked right by me.

"Hey, Liam," I said as he ran off.

"YOUR THAT CREEP!" I yelled at Liam. I heard a faint laugh in the distance.

5 min later

I walked into my house as my parents started screaming at me asking questions like

¨Did you get a job!¨, ¨What were you doing.¨and something like ¨Do you think he got a job.¨

I answered with a yes of course. But then my parents both go around me and give me a huge hug which I thought could have killed me if it was any tighter, maybe if I said no it wouldn't have been as bad as getting a killer hug from your parents.