Hi, I'm back:D lol, starting a new story, but I think this one is like really good, but y'all be the judge. Yeah, it's a Cinderella story and I'll explain who fits what character and its based off the Disney movie, as I only know that version (and if the original is the same, then yay!) Ok, so Cinderella is Maddie.
Evil Step sister: London (even though they're not related, she still treats her like the evil step sisters treated Cinderella).
Evil Step Mom: Mr Mosby (yeah, he's a guy and not her mother, but he gives her work, just like the evil step-mother)
Fairy Godmother: Carrie(always kind to her)
Prince Charming: one of her old boyfriends (including Trevor and Jason) or Zack????? You guess, but I know who it is:D And Maddie is 18, twins 15.
Chapter 1: Work, work, work
Maddie Fitzpatrick sighed as she opened up the Candy Counter early on Saturday morning. Mr Mosby made her work extra early for reason unbeknown to her. She hated it when he did this to her, but she didn't hate him. He was nice, but could be scary sometime. Maddie picked up a stack of 'Teen Trend Magazine' and started to place some on the counter, while putting the rest next to it. She then took her position behind the counter and waited for early guests to arrive.
The first person to enter the lobby was London. Maddie sighed. She didn't hate London, I mean she was her best friend, but with the Tipton Ball that night and everything, she was dumping so much work on Maddie. Worst of all, London never said thank you or asked foe her help. She didn't pay either.
"Maddie, I need you to help me pick out a dress for tonight." London said. Maddie shook her head. "Sorry London, I have work to do. I need this money really badly."
London frowned. "But I could always lend you money again. What's it for this time?" London asked. Maddie quickly shook her head, remembering what had happened last time. "Thanks, but no thanks. I'm saving up enough money to help pay for my first year at Harvard if I don't get the scholarship."
London shook her head and came behind the counter and put the closed sign up. "Come on Maddie." She said and dragged her out of the hotel. Maddie sighed and saw Mr Mosby glaring at her from the front desk. Maddie gulped; hopefully she would still have a job when she got back.
Trevor walked into the Tipton, looking for Maddie. He remembered that she worked as the candy counter girl, but saw that it was closed. 'Maybe she doesn't work on Saturdays.' He thought. Trevor shrugged and walked up to the front desk to check into the hotel, he could wait until the ball to surprise Maddie.
As Trevor was talking to Mr Mosby, Lance came in also looking for the blond girl. Seeing her not in her usual place, he just shrugged and went back to the pool, passing Chuck who was pushing a cart full of food for the ball. He looked over to the counter and sighed when he didn't see Maddie standing there.
Jason then walked in through the front doors. He was wearing a disguise for two reasons,
1. So London didn't recognise him, and
2. So Maddie wouldn't recognise him, yet.
But she wasn't standing behind the counter, so he left to go back to his hotel. By now, Zack and Cody were in the lobby. Both boys were heading to the skate park to meet up with some of their friends. Zack was a bit upset when he didn't see Maddie; he really needed to ask her something.
"Come on Zack, she'll be here later." Cody said impatiently. Zack shrugged and followed his brother out of the Tipton.
"London! A little help?!" Maddie said as she barely made it through the revolving doors. London didn't hear her, so she just kept right on walking to the lift. Maddie sighed and tried to follow, with little success as bag kept falling out of her arms.
"Maddie, please tell me London is not making you work like a dog again." Esteban said, helping Maddie with London's stuff into the lift. "No Esteban, I'm just helping her out this once."
Mr Mosby passed by and managed to stop the lift from closing just in time. "Glad to see you Maddie. I need to speak with you, urgently." He said. Maddie nodded and dropped London's things and ran out the lift. "Hey, Maddie! You can't-" London said, but was cut off from the lift doors closing.
"Is it about skipping my whole morning shift?" Maddie asked as she followed Mr Mosby into the staff room. He nodded. "I'm afraid if you want that money so badly, you're going to have to miss the ball tonight and do some cleaning in our guest's rooms. It's not like Muriel is going to do it anytime soon."
Maddie sighed. She was really looking forward to going to the ball, it was going to be fun. But going to Harvard was more important to her, so she would have to make sacrifices. "Ok, I'll do it." She said. Mr Mosby smiled. "Good. I'm sorry that I have to do this to you, but it's the only way I can help you."
Maddie nodded. "I understand." She said and went back to the Candy counter where she found a nice surprise. A bouquet of roses lay on her desk along with a note.
Dearest Maddie,
I've known you for some time now and I really like you a lot. Please go to the Tipton Ball tonight so we can meet and talk this through.
Love from,
Your Prince Charming
Maddie frowned. 'Now who could leave me a not like this?' She thought. 'Zack!' Maddie saw Esteban walking past and waved him to the counter. "Did you see who put this note on my counter?" She asked. Esteban nodded.
"It was me; it came in the mail for you so I put it here for you." He said and ran off. Maddie sighed. 'So, maybe it isn't Zack.' Maddie thought and felt her heart drop. Sure, she is developing a small crush on him, but that's all it was ever going to be. She hoped.
"Hey Maddie!" Said a familiar voice. She looked up from the letter and her heart started beating faster. "Trevor!" She said, moving to the other side of the counter to hug him. She then saw Jason enter the hotel and walk towards her as she pulled away from the hug.
"Hey Jason." Maddie said. She then saw Chuck and Lance come to join in on what was happening. 'Ok, wait. Trevor, Jason, Chuck and Lance are all past boyfriends, could one of them be my Prince Charming?' she thought. But there was no time for this, she wasn't going to the Ball. Maddie sighed and shooed the boys away from the counter. Maddie picked up a rose and twirled it between her fingers while she thought up a plan to get herself into the ball.
Hope y'all like. I know that in all Cinderella stories, we all know who the prince is, but to make this story more exciting, you have to guess! Lol, review and if I get good reviews and over 5, chapter 2 will be up tomorrow! Yay!
