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Chapter one:
"This cannot be true!" Thought Christine as she walked into the Paris
Opera
House. She could not believe she was really there. She looked up and
saw
those stairs she once walked down.
Long ago Christine Daae lived in this old Paris house. Now she was
going
back for a silent auction. She did not want anyone to see her face. She
knew
if they did it would bring back too many memories. She could not handle
that. "Let's start the bidding on this beautiful chandelier. Do I hear
500?"
Said the auctioneer.
Christine looked up and saw the chandelier. She looked around and
spotted a
familiar face. It was Raoul. Did he know that she was there or not?
"9 thousand!" said Raoul. Christine knew that something was going to
happen.
They started to raise the chandelier and everything felt like it was
all
coming back.
It was the day of the show and Carlotta was being a pain like usual.
She
wanted her dog to get pampered along with her. "Were is my water?" She
yelled.
The cast was running around trying to get everything ready for the
show.
Then they all heard a loud scream. They looked at each other too see if
anyone knew what it was. "It's him! It's the Phantom! He's back." Said
one
of them
"Yes it's me!" Said another trying to trick them all or was it?