Hey everyone! I wrote this poem for Asuka Langley althoughI haven't seen an episode of Neon Genesis Evangelion yet i've read up a lot on her character and she fascinates me to no end. Besides, even though i've never seen the series Asuka looks so kick ass so i'm pretty sure i'd love her charrie. Anyways first NGE thing so please be kind with the reviews. Thx!


I am not lost,
But I have yet to be found,
A wandering soul,
So aimless to the crowd,

Looking down at my shoes,
A heavy heart in my hand,
So many burdens,
I wish they'd understand,

There's so much more to me,
That meets the eye,
As I cry out my tears,
Letting go of my pride,

Unwated memories,
With a unforgettable past,
An unknown future,
Emotions as fragile as glass,

But I am not lost,
Just yet to be found,
When I sit here and tell you the story,
About the new girl in town.


So? Wutchu think? Did I kick ass relating the poem to Asuka? Or does it not relate at all? Is my poem good? Should it be for a Inuyasha or a Witch Hunter Robin charrie? Or another anime charrie lol. I know i'm asking a lot of questions but do you care? o.O

HeHe please review!

XoXo Ashley