Zalzar: The Forgotten Skeleton Brother

Chapter 1

By: FrostFangPixl

It's cold, darkness is all around, there's no one in sight except for him, he has been here for a long time, exactly how long? He doesn't know, where is he? He is in a dark place, known only as the void, what is the void? It's a place where you exist and don't exist, where time does and doesn't take place, where he exists and doesn't exist all at the same time, but who exactly is he? His name is Zalzar, and he's been here for a long time, or so he thinks because he has no way to tell, and he's a monster of the Underground, specifically a skeleton related to the two other skeletons yes, Sans and Papyrus. Zalzar wants to speak to his brothers, but he can't stuck in the void, only sometimes he can leave the void, but he always comes back, and he doesn't know that either. How does he leave? He teleports out of the void via his own magic, only he doesn't look like himself, whenever he temporarily leaves the void, he appears wearing a dark purple robe, who else do you know that wears that? That's right, he is the riverperson.

Using his magic he can only manifest for a few hours at best, if he waits long enough and charges his magic, he can manifest for a day or two, but if he has that much time, why doesn't Zalzar talk to Sans and Papyrus? Well a bit of a complicated reason, the timeline and the F.U.N. Factor forbides it and bides him to the boat, meaning he can't leave the boat to go see his brothers, however he knows that there is a way to actually be apart of the timeline, by using a lot of his magic, he can manipulate the F.U.N. Factor into making him apart of the timeline, but he'd have to wait and charge his magic for many many years, but how could he figure out how many years have gone by?

He can look at the timeline from the void using the START SCREEN, meaning he can watch everything in the underground from the void, watch but not interact. Well can't he just watch people age? Supposedly, yes but monsters don't age, only humans do and he knew that, so does that mean he's stuck forever? Well yes….until a miracle happened.

As he was watching the underground via the START SCREEN, he saw something...a human fall from above, a human he estimated to be about 11 years old, this was good….no, fantastic for him! As long as he watches the human age, he can figure out how long he has been charging his magic, so for many years he would sit and watch the human grow as she aged in years, until many years later, the human, figured out to be known as Frisk, turned 19….meaning that Zalzar has been waiting and charging his magic for 8 whole years, and he thought it was time for him to finally leave this wretched place, his eye glowed as he charged a purple aura around him, he charged this aura for a long time, until finally he closed his eyes, and as his real self, he awoke laying in the snow, in Snowdin, he had finally been free….


Hey everyone, thanks for reading chapter 1 of Zalzar The Forgotten Skeleton Brother, and before anyone says, yes in my story Frisk is a female for a reason that I'm sure most people will know, please bear with me as this is my very first story and chapter that I've ever written, speaking of which I'd like to thank my friends Evan, and Zach for helping me with grammar, writing, story and etc., etc., thank you all, I will write chapter 2 as soon as I can!

Forever thankful,

FrostFangPixl