Hello, and welcome to the story of "Of Demons and Coordinators New and Improved!" This fic will focus on an Ice nin who was born not from a natural womb, but from an artificial means of birth. The story will take place in the Land of Ice. Ice nin Naruto, as well as a NarutoTayuyaKoyuki, and ShinosukeFemOC. I will also throw in a crossover from Gundam Seed Destiny. Yes, this is a Naruto Gundam Seed Destiny crossover.
Chapter One: Beginning
(Cosmic Era 59)
Nine months before the experiment was successful, the Hyou nins that participated in the Ultimte Ninja project has collected the Kekkei Genkai from around the Hidden Continent. The Asukas were pregnant with a baby boy when they decided to use him in the experiment.
"We've got to limit only one bloodline limit. Otherwise, the project is about to fail." said one scientist.
"But which doujutsu? The Sharingan, or the Byakugan?" asked another doctor.
"We can mix both, but we can't add a third, or the baby is totally dead." said a third scientist.
"Let's get started." said the second scientist.
And so the Ultimate ninja project was conceived, and it would take another nine months until C.E. 60, when the experiment would be successully created. Meanwhile, in the village of Konohagakure at the Ka no Kuni, the Yondaime Hokage Minato Namikaze along with his wife Kushina Uzumaki were waiting in a clinic for a special doctor. They recently heard that there was a technology that would enable to enhance children into what their parents had desired.
"It wouldn't be bad, Kushina." Minato said. "Our future kid will be a first-generation Coordinator."
"I'm afraid that he would suffer discrimination." Kushina replied as her brother Nagato a.k.a. Pein of Akatsuki had arrived. "Nagato, are you here to help me cope with the pain?"
"Yes, Kushina." Nagato replied. "Although the baby that you're carrying wouldn't be born for a while."
"I got an idea. Why not use our baby in the Ultimate ninja project?" Minato asked.
"They already got another baby. Sure, we can do that." Kushina said as the doctor has arived.
"Uzumaki-san, we're ready for you now." the doctor said. "You have given us the consent to use your baby in the experiment?"
"Yeah, us and the Asuka clan will be the two clans that will have the first Coordinator ninjas." Kushina said.
"All right, let's get started." the doctor said.
While the baby was being placed in an artificial womb, the scientists in the village of Hyougakure had done the same thing. Throughout the nine months the experiment carried on. In Konoha, Minato and Kushina were discussing the Kekkei Genkai that their future child would have.
"Well, Naruto would have the Rinnegan, since the Uzumaki clan has that bloodline." Kushina said.
"Yeah, but the Namikaze clan has the Nehangan, which is just like the Rinnegan." Minato said. "Imagine if our bloodlines have been mixed."
"Don't worry about that, Minato-kun." Kushina said. "Our future Coordinator child would have twice the size of his chakra reserves as a Natural."
"You'd better be right." Minato said.
After the nine months had passed, the Hyou nin that supervised the experiment saw the fetus act up. Immediately he rushed to his colleagues.
"Everyone, the baby is moving!" he said.
"Kazuo, are you sure?" said another scientist.
"Yes. He is moving." Kazuo said. He was the father of the baby that was about to arrive into the world. The Asuka patriarch rushed bacj to the lab, and saw the baby move again. He then gathered some scientists, and told them what to do.
"Release the baby at once. The Musashi clan's baby is still in its fifth month." Kazuo said. "Their baby would be born four months after the experimental baby in Konoha has been born."
"Right." replied the lead scientist as they shut down the artifiial womb, and wrapped the baby around in a blanket.
"What shall you name this baby, Kazuo-sama?" the lead scientist asked.
"Shinosuke Asuka. That will be the baby's name. You sure that this baby has been given the proper bloodline that we've acquired from the Hyuuga and Uchiha clans?" Kazuo said.
"Yes, Kazuo-sama." replied the lead scientist.
Two months later, the second baby that was enhanced in Konoha was ready to be born. Minato and Kushina were rushing to the clinic to where the experiment was conducted. The doctor was there when the two new parents have arrived.
"Well, Hokage-sama. The baby is ready to be born into the world." the doctor said.
"Great. Thanks for the enhancement." Minato said. Just then, a Konoha Chunin rushed to them, while panicking.
"Hokage-sama, the Kyuubi no Yoko is here!" he yelled.
"Dammit. We've got to go there and kill it." Minato said. "Kushina, stay here and protect the baby. Should you be in danger, throw this kunai here." He gave her a three pronged kunai that has a special signalling point, then rushed to the scene where the great beast was attacking.
Meanwhile, the Kyuubi No Yoko was relentlessly killing many Konoha nin that rushed to defend their home. The situation grew hopeless, until Minato arrived on the scene.
"Kuchiyose no Jutsu!" Minato said as a gigantic toad appeared before the fox. The great toad then clashed with the demon fox, until he too began to lose hope. Kushina on the other hand, was having trouble keeping out an intruder that tried to kill the baby.
"Get away!" Kushina yelled. The intruder had a rifle in his hand, and tried to shoot her, but she threw the kunai that Minato gave her. Immediately, the struggling Yondaime Hokage rushed to the scene, only to come in too late. Kushina Uzumaki was shot dead, but the baby was safe. Minato then cleaved off the intruder's head, and picked up the baby. Then, he went back to the fox, and made some handseals.
"Fuuin Jutsu! Shiiki Fuujin!" Minato yelled as Shinigami appeared, and a hand had wrested the soul out of the fox. Then, he collapsed to the floor, dead as well. Meanwhile, a Hyou nin had watched the scene, and hid himself for a bit. The bundle went down to the ground, and rushed to pick it up. A Konoha Chunin tried to catch up to him.
"Hey! He's going off with that demon reincarnate!" he yelled.
"Kill him for the preservation of our blue and pure world!" they all yelled, but the Hyou nin had knocked them unconscious. He then was knocked unconscious by a Hyuuga main branch member. Hiashi Hyuuga took the bundle, and went to the former-now-reinstated Sandaime Hokage.
"Hokage-sama. A mystery nin tried to run off with Minato's child." Hiashi said while trying to control his tears.
"I see. He may have good intentions regarding the future of Naruto, but I think we shold take care of him for the time being." Sarutobi said. However, the Hyou nin regained consciousness, and went th Hiashi.
"He still has relatives in Hyougakure. Please let me take him to his grandfather." the Hyou nin said.
"Still as slick as ever, eh Mamoru?" Hashi asked.
"Yes, Hiashi-sama. He would be treated with contempt if he stays here. The villagers aren't gonna honor Minato's last wish." Mamoru Tsukasa said. He was known as the Hyougakure's Legendary Sannin, and his skills combine that of Jiraiya, Orochimaru, and Tsunade.
"It was in Minato's will that I take in the boy." Hiashi said. "At least I can repay him for what he has done to the Hyuuga clan." Hiashi said.
"Very well, but in three or four years, I come back for the boy." Mamoru said.
Mamoru POV timeskip four years C.E. 64
I watched the scene where young Naruto was being chased by the villagers. The scene was horrific at the least. Being a coordinator myself, I knew the scent of Blue Cosmos where they go.
"KIll the demon brat!"
"For the preservation of our blue and pure world!"
This scene was the same for the lst four years, ever since he was born. Immediately, I went to stop the villagers. But they aimed their guns at me.
"We'll kill you for not letting us kill the demon when he was born." a villager said.
"You can kill me, but you can't kill the boy. Be greatful he kept the Kyuubi at bay." I said.
"We wouldn't care that much." another villager said as I picked up the boy, and went straight for the Hokage tower. Sarutobi was doing paperwork when I rushed in.
"Hokage-sama. I got the boy here. He's bleeding badly." I said.
"I had this talk with the villagers, but they won't listen." Saerutobi said as a bearded man had arrived. I couldn't believe my eyes at what am I seeing. The fact that Uzumi Nara Attha has arrived in Konoha has got me wondering. Is Orb going to dominate our world? I actually want ZAFT to dominate our world, because they are like me. We are all coordinators, and that we're proud of being one.
"Hokage-sama. I am Uzumi Nara Attha of the Orb Union." Uzumi said. "I have come here for an alliance with the Ka no Kuni, and with Konohagakure."
"Yes, I was expecting you." Sarutobi said. "The fact that we would love to be your subjects. Because we can learn from your nation."
"Of course. Here's the paper regarding the alliance." Uzumi said as Sarutobi signed the papers. "We are glad to have you as our ally."
The Lion of Orb tried to sign the agreement with other nations, but it seems that my idol Siegel Clyne has beaten him to the punch. The fact that he and Patrick Zala had made an alliance with my village was a dream come true. They also made sure that the entire country is filled with coordinators, since the Land of the Hourglass, or the PLANTS as they call it, are getting too crowded. Besides, I knew that the Namikaze clan were the only clan that were coordinators. But Naruto would be the first Ultimate ninja that was a coordinator, along with Shinosuke Asuka, and a Musashi clan member.
Year 70 of the Cosmic Era. A heated war was raging between the numerically superior Earth Alliance, and the recently estabilished military force of ZAFT. The war grew bloodier as Junius Seven was destroyed in a nuclear attack. Since then, the ZAFT forces has deployed N-Jammers throughout Earth. I quickly placed my jounin status on hold, to join in the fighting. I made it to the ZAFT academy, with the rank of the White Coat. However, I wasn't placed in the Le Creuset Team, because my other classmates, Tomislav Zvonkovic and Igor Dimitrovic were assigned instead. I was to form my own team, and were assigned to a Pangea-class ship. Before I left for ZAFT, I had taken Naruto to Hyougakure to his grandfather, Takeo Namikaze Sr. and to his future best friend, Shinosuke. It was kinda heartwarming when the two boys struck up a great friendship. This is my story.
This is the new and improved chapter of the original Demons and Coordinators, so compare the results!