Hey! so this is my first fan fic so i'll just see if y'all like it! Here it is... (and this chapter is pretty short but i did write some others that are much longer...)
MPOV
Eyes closed. Wind whipping through my hair. Leaning out the car window. Not thinking about moving. Not thinking about JJ or Sam. Not thinking about my father. Not thinking about my home (which is Colorado). Not thinking about my new 'home' in Arizona.
Go with the flow, Max.
Well, hey there. I'm Maximum Ride (Max for short). I'm 16 and I have 3 younger siblings—Ella (15), Gazzy (10), and Angel (8). My mom is Dr. Valencia Martinez (a vet). Our dog's name is Total (pretty much just an obnoxious scottie mix). We were moving from Colorado to Arizona.
"20 more minutes, guys!" I hear my mom say.
There were cheers from my 3 siblings. I groaned. Great. Just great.
FPOV
"I swear, Nudge, if you start singing that song again I'll scream!" Iggy yells. Quite a few heads turn our way.
"Shut up guys." I say quietly, but I do agree with Iggy. Here we are, trying to have a peaceful lunch and Nudge the motor mouth won't stop singing Superbass.
Nudge smirks. "Sorry guys. I forget sometimes."
"Oh, oh sure you do." Iggy mutters sarcastically.
I just sigh and roll my eyes.
"Hey hottie." I hear a voice say.
I grit my teeth but turn around and answer in the nicest voice I can right now, "Hi Lissa."
"What are you doing tomorrow night?" she asks, leaning down on the table so her boobs are in my face.
"Studying." I say, looking away.
She pouted. "But Nick, it's a Saturday."
I take a big bite of my apple, chew slowly, and swallow. And repeat several more times before she stands up, flips her red hair and leaves.
"Still got the ladies checkin you out big guy." Iggy says kind of sarcastically, kind of jealously.
I just shoot him a look
So what did you think? like it? no? Review pls:)