I decided to change this chapter as it is one of the crappest in all history

Momo was lying limply on her futon. I brushed her cheek with my hand, her face was ice cold, she was covered in a film of sweat and was shivering, how I wished I could take her place, I wanted to take all of the pain and stress from her, I wanted her to come out of this trance of worry and pain, I knew she was going to die soon, the thought would've made me cry if I had been capable of doing so, things did come out of my eyes although not tears.

Her eyelids fluttered gently, but heavily as she opened her eyes slowly.

I could tell that this was taking a massive effort for her. She groaned as she tried to lift her hand, she raised it to my face with a little help from me.

It took everything I had to not scream 'DON'T YOU DARE DIE ON ME' into her face.

"Please shiro, become the strongest captain there has ever been, become proud and strong, become great shiro, for me." And those were the last words she had uttered before the feverish glint left her eyes, she was dead.

He had done what she had told him to do, some years later he had become a great leader, he was proud respected and liked by everyone, he was also strong, very strong, but one thing momo had not told him to be was responsible, his captains haori swirled as he turned a sharp corner and walked into a bar. "I thought id find you here Rangiku" toshiro said in delight.

Rangiku was drinking sake, sitting in the middle of Shuuhei and Captain Shunsui Kyraku.

"Oh great the party can really start now that you're here captain" Rangiku said without the slightest ounce of sarcasm "haven't I told you enough times, my name is toshiro, not 'captain'"

"does it really matter what your name is," Shunsui said" jus' comin' git some sake inta yer!"

'I don't think I should…but I will" so whilst Toshiro's 3rd and 4th seat did the captain and lieutenants paperwork. They were both getting drunk, and having a great time doing it too, and then, they heard a blood curdling scream coming from the doorway. The scream was not one of fear, but one of shock.

Although she had changed a lot as the years passed, as soon as the young captain looked up, he recognized her immediately. He only managed to choke out one word. "Momo".

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