Ok I know some of you out there have really started to love my story of Kim Possible meets The OC, but as I got further down the road I felt that some characters were acting weird, and I never explained why Kim stopped going on missions. Well I have decided to revise all of the chapters I have up so far. I know most of you'll didn't like the way Ron has been acting, but I thought that it would be kind of cool to see what would happen when Orange County gets the best of him. Also in some chapter I decided to leave things out. Well I now feel like I need to put them back in. So please enjoy my revised edition of CHAPTER ONE: The Move

CHAPTER ONE: The Move

These last three weeks had been very tough on Dr. James Possible. When he found out that he had been offered a new job designing and testing rockets he gladly accepted it. He along with the rest of the Possible family would be moving to Newport, California. When he called up his wife Ann to give her the good news, she couldn't be more thrilled. Even Jim and Tim seemed to be rather excited about the big move. The only Possible family member who didn't like the idea of leaving Middleton was his eldest child Kimberly.

"What do you mean we're moving to California?' Yelled Kim as her parents had brought her into the living room to give her the news.

"Now Kimmie keep your voice down. My goodness what will the neighbors think?" Exclaimed her mother.

"No I will not keep my voice down! I don't give a damn what the hell the neighbors think! I don't want to move to California! I have a life here, I have all of my friends, and I have…" Tears began to form in Kim's eyes at the thought that just popped into her brain.

"I have Ron!" She said getting up from the couch and running upstairs to her bedroom.

The last day of school had come and gone. Kim said good-bye to her friends, wished them a very good summer, and to have an amazing senior year. When she got home she knew she would have to pack up all of her things. As much as she didn't want to leave Middleton, she knew that trying to force her parents to stay was out of the question. She had her best friend Monique come over to help her pack and deal with the situation at hand.

"California girl? You can't be serious!" Monique had said as the two teens had started packing up some of Kim's cloths into boxes.

"What are you going to do about Drakken and Shego?" Asked Monique, as she folded up some of Kim's Club Banana pants.

"I talked to my father about that, and he said for right now I would have to give it up. He told me that I would be going to a private school, Harbor, and that since it is a private school it would be impossible for me to just get up and leave class. I can't just tell the teacher hey I'm sorry that I can't finish the lesion, I have to go save the world from evil!" complained Kim, and she fell onto her bed.

"Yeah I can see how that would be a problem. So who is going to save the world then?" Asked Monique with a confused look on her face.

"Wade told me that Global Justice would be looking for someone to fill in for me." Said Kim with her hands covering her face. She just couldn't imagine the idea that she would have to give up saving the world to someone else.

"Have to told Ron the news yet?" Said Monique looking over at Kim with a sad look on her face.

"No he's in New York right now visiting family. My dad said I could call him later tonight once I had everything packed and ready to go." Said Kim. She couldn't imagine how Ron was going to take it, or how the flight would be, because she really didn't feel in the mood to sit with her family. If it wasn't for her father's new job they wouldn't be moving to Newport, whatever the hell it was in the first place.

"We will be landing at LAX airport in 15 minutes." Came a calm voice over the intercom.

Kim was still mad at her parents for everything. When they boarded the plan she tried to sit as far away from them as possible. Since she didn't want to just take someone's seat she told her father that she need to use the bathroom before they left. Instead of actually going to the bathroom she just waited till the lady had said "Finally boarding to Los Angeles."

She then walked up to the lady gave her a fake smile and got onboard the plane. She found that the plane wasn't very crowded at all and she was able to sit a good distance away from her parents and the tweebs. As the plane began it's decent Kim remembered the conversation over the phone she had with Ron about her moving away, and that when he arrived back to Middleton, his best friend since the age of four and now girlfriend wouldn't be there to see him. She would be all the way in California. Ron told her about how they could make saving the world work. It wouldn't be as hard as when Ron had moved all the way to Norway, but after Kim explained that she would be going to a private school the future of both Kim and Ron saving the world seemed remote.

Even though they're conversation was over the phone and not in person Kim could tell that Ron was holding back tears. This time there were a lot more tears than when Ron had moved to Norway, mostly because at least Kim was able to give Ron a good-bye hug. But now Kim was the one moving ad there was no way she could get a good-bye hug, or even a good-bye kiss from the one she loved.

After the Possible family got off the plane they made a quick pit stop to eat.

"Hey look California isn't all that bad, look Kimmie Cub they have a Bueno Nacho!" Said James Possible to his daughter. Kim wasn't buying it one bit. Her father was trying to get her to see the bright side of moving away. The only thing that Kim could see was being in Ron's arms, and with him all the way in New York that wasn't going to happen anytime soon.

"Kimmie, I know your upset, but just think of all the new friends you'll make. You can still visit Ron over the summer." Said her mother who was trying to make the best of the situation. Kim knew she was trying to make things better but they weren't.

"I'm not hungry. Can we just leave!" asked Kim getting up from the booth and going to grab her luggage.

"Kimmie please try to make the best of the situation, like Jim and Tim. The twins didn't really care that they were moving. They didn't have any friends they would be leaving behind like Kim was. They had each other and as far as they were concerned that was all they needed.

"Mom, the only reason Jim and Tim don't care is because all they ever did back in Middleton was stay up in their room and build things that usually made my life hell or destroyed the structure to the house!" yelled Kim.

To Kim the other hard part about moving was the fact that she had to explain to the rest of the cheerleaders that come senior year Bonnie would be cheer captain. From the look on Bonnie's face she couldn't be more happy at the fact that she had finally gotten what she wanted after three years and now could rub it in Kim's face.

"Don't worry Kim, we will all miss you. Oh and I will do just fine as cheer captain; I can finally get this squad to be perfect!" Laughed Bonnie as Kim walked out of the gym.

"Wow look at all of the buildings!" said Jim as he looked out the window as they left Los Angeles in a taxi that would drive them to Orange County, and to they're new home. Kim

"Totally cool," Replied Tim, also staring at the tall building and the mass amounts of people. They arrived up at the house as the sun began to sink over the ocean. Kim had to admit that the gated community was rather nice. And on the plus side Kim was only five minutes away from the beach. Still all of this was missing something, or someone to be more precise. "Ron." Said Kim to herself as she climbed out of the taxi. As she looked up at the house she had to admit that it was indeed a lot bigger and grander than their old house. There was a three-car garage, which James found to be big enough for his new car that he would be able to buy with the amount of money he would be making at his new job. But it wasn't the money that helped him from his decision. It was the idea that he would be designing rockets far superior to the ones he had help build back in Middleton.

When Kim opened the large oak doors she was astounded at how nice the interior of the house looked. "Oh Kimmie, your room is right upstairs. It's the first one on the left." Said Ann Possible with a smile on her face.

Kim walked up the stairs and couldn't believe the size of her room. It like the rest of the house was huge, and a lot bigger than her old room. In fact if she wanted to she could live in her closet. She also had her own bathroom with an infinity tube and shower. She walked out of the bathroom and collapsed onto her new bed. Everything from the old house had already been moved in. She looked over at the clock. It said it was almost 9 o'clock. That ment that it was around 5 o'clock in New York. Ron had already left and was heading to the airport.

"Um Dad don't you think we should have waited a little bit?" Said Ron in a worried voice. It started to down pour as they left. From the back seat Ron couldn't see out of the windshield.

"Honey I think Ronald is right, maybe we should wait until the storm passes." Said Ron's mother in a concerned voice as she set her hand on her husbands shoulder. He looked her in the eyes and then said, "All right just let me take the exit ramp."

"LOOK OUT!!" Yelled Ron's mother.

Due to all of the rain Mr. Stoppable had missed the exit ramp. There was a loud smashing noise as the car slammed into the guardrail along the side of the road. The windows on the passenger side smashed as the car came in contact with the guardrail. Ron shielded his eyes as glass went all over the inside of the car as it then flipped over the railing. The car fell a good 20 feet before rolling the rest of the way down into the river. It took all of Ron energy not to black out when the car had rolled into the river. Ron opened his eyes. The car was upside down in the small river, but began taking on water fast through the broken windows. Ron took his seatbelt off, and tried to move around. His ribs were killing him. From the pain it was causing him a few were either cracked or broken.

"Mom, you okay?" He asked through moans of pain. She wasn't moving. Ron looked over at her; the airbag had deployed, and upon a closer look Ron could see parts of it had red stains.

"NO!" Yelled Ron as the water was now at his knees as he moved forwards his mom on his hands and knees. He reached around the seat and when his hand touched her face, he could feel something warm run down his fingers. Ron took it all in so fast, he couldn't believe it. His mother was dead; it looked like when the window smashed the glass had got her right in her face and neck. Ron looked over at his dad he wasn't moving either. Ron looked at the front of the car. Even though it was upside down Ron could tell what had happened. His father had taken the exit to late and smashed into the guardrail. Upon doing so the rail crashed in through the windshield and had got his father right in the face killing him instantly. Ron looked away; he couldn't even make out his fathers face because the metal rail had pretty much scrapped most of it off. There was blood all over the driver and passenger seat; Ron thought he was going to throw up from the sight.

He knew there was nothing he could do to save his parents they were gone. He had to save himself. The water was rushing in so fast it was almost above his head by the time he had smashed through the rear window. All of a sudden he was sucked out of the car as water poured out of the broken back window. Ron broke the surface, coughing and spiting up dirty water. He looked around.

"No….NO NO NO!! Where the hell is the car! NO GOD DAMN IT!" He yelled, as he franticly searched for the car. But it was impossible with all of the rushing water. He had to get himself on dry land because he was running out of energy and he knew that he wouldn't be able to keep himself above the water much longer. The water was quite deep from where Ron was now but with in seconds he had paddled his way to the side of the road. He didn't know if he was going to make it or not. He then wondered how his girlfriend Kim was doing right about now. She was most likely in bed because of the time difference. As he though about the fact that he might never see her again, tears began to flow down Ron's face as rain pounded on his cold body. He tried to smile as he though of Kim; he truly was lucky to have a girlfriend like Kim. And with that Ron's world went into blackness.

Kim looked over at her clock. "It's only 10:37PM!" She said to herself. She wasn't able to fall asleep. Sure her new bed was very comfortable, but she really missed Ron.

Kim then got out of bed and though it best if she went outside to get some fresh air. She got dressed and then though it best to head out the back door and around the side of the house. She walked down to the end of the driveway, and sat at the end of the curb. Across the street she could barley see two figures standing in one of the yards.

There was a girl with long brown hair, and a boy who was rather tall and had dark black hair. Kim tried to listen in but they were to far away.

She really wanted to talk to Ron. She looked at her watch again. It was almost 11:00PM. Ron didn't tell her what time he would be leaving or getting on the plane back to Middleton, so it really didn't hurt to call the house he was staying at.

She dialed the number in.

"Hello may I speak to Ron Stoppable?" Asked Kim.

All of a sudden the lady on the other end of the phone began to cry.

"Um can I please speak to Ron Stoppable, I'm his girlfriend Kim Possible." Said Kim trying to figure out why the woman was crying her eyes out.

"I'm sorry to have to tell you this, but Ronald and his parents were involved in a car accident. They told me both his parents died instantly, and that Ronald is in critical condition." And with that The lady wailed at the top of her lungs. Kim's heart stopped beating. Ron…car accident!

"No this is just a dream!" Though Kim to herself as she stood in the kitchen. All of a sudden the phone that was in Kim's hand fell to the floor and seconds later so did Kim. Tears began to run down her cheeks as thoughts of Ron's lifeless body filled her mind.

" He…can't be gone." She told her self through tears as she lay on the kitchen floor.

END OF CHAPTER…

Authors Notes: Kim yells at both of her parents about the fact that she will have to move to California, and away from Ron. After the last day of school Monique comes over to help Kim pack. Kim then explains that Global Justice will find someone to fill in for Kim since it will be a lot harder for her to go on missions in private school. Kim also tells Monique that she hasn't been able to tell Ron the bad news of her moving.

The scene then switches to show Kim not sitting on the plane with her parents since she is still furious at them. While on the plane she thinks back to telling Ron the sad news that she will be moving to Newport while he is in New York visiting family.

Kim's father tries to make Kim feel better but it doesn't work. Kim then has a flashback to her telling Bonnie she is moving and can't be cheer captain their senior year. Kim then gets out of the taxicab once they get to their new house to find out that everything is a lot bigger than their old house. While laying on her bed she wonders how her boyfriend Ron is doing.

Ron and his family are driving to the airport in a thunderstorm. While trying to take an exit ramp they end up crashing into the guardrail and going over the side into a river, where both of Ron's parents die. Ron gets out and is able to get to safety before blacking out.

Kim is unable to sleep so she goes outside and sits on the curb where she is able to see but not hear Seth Cohen and Marissa Cooper. Kim then calls the place where Ron had been staying with his relatives to find out Ron was in a car accident. Kim then can't believe what had just happens and falls to the ground crying her eyes out.

Well that's the end of my revised CHAPTER ONE: The Move, I know it will seem different from the other chapters, but don't worry I will revise chapters two through seven. Please tell me what you think of the revised chapter one. Thank-you