AN: I re wrote this chapter. Here it is.
I don't own.
JUST ONE GLANCE AT YOU by Master G
Dedicated to my friend Anas. . .
Gaz's dark figure sat at her desk, staring blankly at the black screen. Nothing seemed to be able to hold her attention for more than a few seconds. Currently, she had nothing to do and was bored out of her mind. Pushing her black computer chair away from the cold, metal desk, swiveling around in circles. Sighing, she turned on her computer, she thought she might check to see if any online friends were there.
" ' deaditeguy' is curently logged on" the computer told Gaz in a monotone voice. Gently, her snow white hands directed the mouse over to his name and IM'd him.
DrkChild13: Hi
deaditeguy: Hey : x
deaditeguy: : x : x : x : x : x : x : x : x : x : x : x
DrkChild13: lol
deaditeguy: lol what
DrkChild13: nuthin.
deaditeguy: what's up??
DrkChild13: Nothing much. My brother's annoying the hell out of me. The usual.
deaditeguy: can i meet u, plz
DrkChild13: what?
deaditeguy: u, i wanna meet you
DrkChild13: What state are you in?
deaditeguy: the same as you. u told me before.
DrkChild13: oh.
DrkChild13: Listen I have to go. Later.
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: Can I meet u?
DrkChild13: I need to log off.
FALLING HEARTS is being activated by deaditeguy
BUZZ! (lips kiss screen)
deaditeguy: you like?
deaditeguy: my lips. B )
DrkChild13: Yeah, lol. Bye
deaditeguy: so can i meet u?
DrkChild13: Ur not gonna give up are u?
deaditeguy: No. So when can i meet u?
DrkChild13: If I say yes, can I leave?
deaditeguy: yes.
DrkChild13: Ok, next week at the park.
deaditeguy: cool.
DrkChild13 has logged off
Gaz didn't log on for a week.
"What the hell is wrong with me?" she asked herself, concern for her well being filled her voice. "With my luck, he's probably gonna kill me." She sighed and went to her closet. As she opend the door, random clothing itmes fell out, landing gently at her feet.
"Perfect or hideous" she asked herself looking in the mirror. Right now was one of the rre moments where she let herself act feminene. She felt that only vain people care about how strabgers percieve you. She sighed at her own hipocracy.
She checked herself in the full length mirror. Leather-buckled skirt, leggings, boots, fishnet shirt. "Decent," she declared with a small sigh. "OK, I have everything, pocket knife, razor blade, stun gun, all ready."
She walked down the stairs, her boots banged on the stairs with every step she took. She walked into the living room and plopped onto the couch, next to her older brother. Crossing her arms, she narrowed her eyes at the floor. Dib raised an eyebrow at her.
"What's your problem," Dib asked, turning up the volume on Mysterious Mysteries. She sighed rather angrily and looked up at him with a annoyed look tainting her pale face.
"Im insane, that's what's wrong," she said moodily and walked out of the house, grabbing her jacket and wallet from the side table. Dib turned back to the TV and continued to watch his precious Mysterious Mysteries. He would worry about his dear, little sister after this was over.
AN: Yay. I like this better. The original chapter wasn't so bad, but this has more over shadowing in it.
OVER SHADOWING = a word where I, one out of 32 students, am the only one that comprehends the meaning.
I don't own.
JUST ONE GLANCE AT YOU by Master G
Dedicated to my friend Anas. . .
Gaz's dark figure sat at her desk, staring blankly at the black screen. Nothing seemed to be able to hold her attention for more than a few seconds. Currently, she had nothing to do and was bored out of her mind. Pushing her black computer chair away from the cold, metal desk, swiveling around in circles. Sighing, she turned on her computer, she thought she might check to see if any online friends were there.
" ' deaditeguy' is curently logged on" the computer told Gaz in a monotone voice. Gently, her snow white hands directed the mouse over to his name and IM'd him.
DrkChild13: Hi
deaditeguy: Hey : x
deaditeguy: : x : x : x : x : x : x : x : x : x : x : x
DrkChild13: lol
deaditeguy: lol what
DrkChild13: nuthin.
deaditeguy: what's up??
DrkChild13: Nothing much. My brother's annoying the hell out of me. The usual.
deaditeguy: can i meet u, plz
DrkChild13: what?
deaditeguy: u, i wanna meet you
DrkChild13: What state are you in?
deaditeguy: the same as you. u told me before.
DrkChild13: oh.
DrkChild13: Listen I have to go. Later.
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: bye
deaditeguy: Can I meet u?
DrkChild13: I need to log off.
FALLING HEARTS is being activated by deaditeguy
BUZZ! (lips kiss screen)
deaditeguy: you like?
deaditeguy: my lips. B )
DrkChild13: Yeah, lol. Bye
deaditeguy: so can i meet u?
DrkChild13: Ur not gonna give up are u?
deaditeguy: No. So when can i meet u?
DrkChild13: If I say yes, can I leave?
deaditeguy: yes.
DrkChild13: Ok, next week at the park.
deaditeguy: cool.
DrkChild13 has logged off
Gaz didn't log on for a week.
"What the hell is wrong with me?" she asked herself, concern for her well being filled her voice. "With my luck, he's probably gonna kill me." She sighed and went to her closet. As she opend the door, random clothing itmes fell out, landing gently at her feet.
"Perfect or hideous" she asked herself looking in the mirror. Right now was one of the rre moments where she let herself act feminene. She felt that only vain people care about how strabgers percieve you. She sighed at her own hipocracy.
She checked herself in the full length mirror. Leather-buckled skirt, leggings, boots, fishnet shirt. "Decent," she declared with a small sigh. "OK, I have everything, pocket knife, razor blade, stun gun, all ready."
She walked down the stairs, her boots banged on the stairs with every step she took. She walked into the living room and plopped onto the couch, next to her older brother. Crossing her arms, she narrowed her eyes at the floor. Dib raised an eyebrow at her.
"What's your problem," Dib asked, turning up the volume on Mysterious Mysteries. She sighed rather angrily and looked up at him with a annoyed look tainting her pale face.
"Im insane, that's what's wrong," she said moodily and walked out of the house, grabbing her jacket and wallet from the side table. Dib turned back to the TV and continued to watch his precious Mysterious Mysteries. He would worry about his dear, little sister after this was over.
AN: Yay. I like this better. The original chapter wasn't so bad, but this has more over shadowing in it.
OVER SHADOWING = a word where I, one out of 32 students, am the only one that comprehends the meaning.