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Chapter 1: Points of View
Raptor - X
Isla Sorna - Summer 2003
As I sped through the forest one day, I came across an odd little creature with a coat of red and blue.
This odd animal was surely young and not more than an adolescent, almost ready to leave his parents care. This animal would make easy prey for a pack of raptors.
But he intrigued me; this little animal had a very large brain compared to most animals I've seen. I had settled in to my hiding spot just as he finished sharpening a stick.
As I got a closer look at him I saw 2 canine teeth in the front of his mouth. Teeth like mine! but why only two of them? I barely mouthed silently. How can this animal be a hunter, other than his teeth there's nothing that could make him a hunter or a scavenger, I should follow him more closely and get some help. What's he doing I don't understand the symbols he's writing in that thing.
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Diary Entree 7/29/2003
I've been stuck on this Island for a day now since the accident on the cruise boat, my family probably thinks I'm dead no matter what I told them before the sacrifice I made, at least my sister is safe, man do those memories sweep over me...
It was a stormy sea that fateful morning when the ship ran aground on a sandbar during the storm we were tipping over and the captain gave the order to abandon ship.
I rushed to my muster station with my sister but we were too late the boat was tipping and the lifeboat was lowering, our parents were in the boat yelling jump, my sister froze. I saw her and knew. I threw her into the lifeboat and just as I was about to jump the ship tipped and I had to grab the railing, as the ship tipped over, I yelled "I'm not going to die out here! I promise!"
...I closed my book and started to sigh as a tear came to my eye and I thought It's enough to make any other 15 year old cry for his mom. I'll come home I promise!
It's a good thing I found this gun when I washed up on shore, damn I'm hungry, wait a minute I can hunt for my own food, mean how hard could it be!
I got an Idea that bird like lizard I saw back there I think it could be edible, I'll corner one. oops, better take my spear don't want to waste bullets if I don't have too.
There it is. (I run after the dinosaur) I corner it in the brush; it jabs at me with its beak like snout and I shoot it great I wasted a bullet.
I heard of this thing but its supposed to be extinct, how can a gallimimus be alive, hey kid be lucky your not eating fossilized KFC, well, maybe you are, It's just missing the fossilized part, well a least I got something to eat.
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This animal, he, he's a predator, Is he an animal worthy to hunt or is he something more, something like me, something never before seen on this earth, an Intelligent being.
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