Disclaimer: I do not, and will never (sadly) own Inuyasha or any of its
characters.
(though I wish I did) ^_~
I wrote this poem, and then had my good friend Eev beta it for me. Thanks
Eev! She has 2 wonderful fics out which one of them is currently in my
favorites list so go check them out! ^_^ (Her Final Year)
This poem is from one of the characters point of view… I'm going to let you
the reader decide whom you think it is and let you be happy with your
choice! ^_^
Okay I fixed part of the format so I'm crossing my fingers and hoping that
what I did will make it look the way its supposed to! Enjoy ^_^
Ok its being stupid again so if you see it doing this ' then right click
and go to encoding and select Unicode and it should work so you can read it
the way its supposed to be.
Dream
(Revised)
Everywhere I look
I see your face.
Your happy, smiling eyes
Your beautiful cherry lips. . . *oh, how I want those lips.*
I can't make you happy
I wish I was the one who made you smile.
*Oh kami, your smile just makes you even more beautiful.*
But I can't, all I ever do is make you cry,
Make you mad and. . . leave.
Though you are still beautiful when you're angry.
But you'll never love me,
And you'll never see how much I care,
Because I can never make you see. . . me.
You don't see the real me,
The one that loves you so deeply.
It hurts me to see you cry.
Those tears. . . they're what make my barriers break,
What makes my heart ache,
I just want to hold you and make it all better.
But I can't, when I am the one who causes your tears,
Your sobs burn in my ears. . . and I fall to pieces
Trying to understand why I can't, just once, make you smile.
I wish you would smile,
But not for everyone just for . . . me.
Perhaps, I could take away your pain?
No…no I can't, you won't let me,
You don't want me to have that pain,
Because it's all you can have over me.
Do you like to be angry at me?
Do you enjoy toying with my heart?
Only to smash it into pieces all over again?
Why don't I understand?
I won't ever understand.
I'm sorry I can't make you smile.
But. . . I will love you until the end of time,
And at night. . .
When no one is around. . . then, and only then
Will I dream of your smile.
~Jena~
written 7-8-03
revised 7-16-03
I can't thank you enough Eev for all your support in my writing! ^_^
Well I hope you all enjoyed my poem, I'm not one to really write poetry,
but you know how it is when inspired, and you can't rest until you fulfill
your inspiration! ^_~
Even if you don't like it and think it a total piece of trash please do
tell me I want to know what you all think whether good, bad, or some very
constructive criticism. Thanks and later! ^_^
characters.
(though I wish I did) ^_~
I wrote this poem, and then had my good friend Eev beta it for me. Thanks
Eev! She has 2 wonderful fics out which one of them is currently in my
favorites list so go check them out! ^_^ (Her Final Year)
This poem is from one of the characters point of view… I'm going to let you
the reader decide whom you think it is and let you be happy with your
choice! ^_^
Okay I fixed part of the format so I'm crossing my fingers and hoping that
what I did will make it look the way its supposed to! Enjoy ^_^
Ok its being stupid again so if you see it doing this ' then right click
and go to encoding and select Unicode and it should work so you can read it
the way its supposed to be.
Dream
(Revised)
Everywhere I look
I see your face.
Your happy, smiling eyes
Your beautiful cherry lips. . . *oh, how I want those lips.*
I can't make you happy
I wish I was the one who made you smile.
*Oh kami, your smile just makes you even more beautiful.*
But I can't, all I ever do is make you cry,
Make you mad and. . . leave.
Though you are still beautiful when you're angry.
But you'll never love me,
And you'll never see how much I care,
Because I can never make you see. . . me.
You don't see the real me,
The one that loves you so deeply.
It hurts me to see you cry.
Those tears. . . they're what make my barriers break,
What makes my heart ache,
I just want to hold you and make it all better.
But I can't, when I am the one who causes your tears,
Your sobs burn in my ears. . . and I fall to pieces
Trying to understand why I can't, just once, make you smile.
I wish you would smile,
But not for everyone just for . . . me.
Perhaps, I could take away your pain?
No…no I can't, you won't let me,
You don't want me to have that pain,
Because it's all you can have over me.
Do you like to be angry at me?
Do you enjoy toying with my heart?
Only to smash it into pieces all over again?
Why don't I understand?
I won't ever understand.
I'm sorry I can't make you smile.
But. . . I will love you until the end of time,
And at night. . .
When no one is around. . . then, and only then
Will I dream of your smile.
~Jena~
written 7-8-03
revised 7-16-03
I can't thank you enough Eev for all your support in my writing! ^_^
Well I hope you all enjoyed my poem, I'm not one to really write poetry,
but you know how it is when inspired, and you can't rest until you fulfill
your inspiration! ^_~
Even if you don't like it and think it a total piece of trash please do
tell me I want to know what you all think whether good, bad, or some very
constructive criticism. Thanks and later! ^_^