The Murder of a 'Soc'
(EDIT 3/22/2018 CLEANED/DELETE UP AUTHOR NOTES)
Johnny: This is just a short scene of the book that Alice-chan, changed the point of view.
Dark-chan: It is when Bob dieds!
Bob: WHAT!
Dark-chan: The author made you die, I just mix it up! Now! To the story!
(I am just jumping into the scene so it might be a little confusing, but Ponyboy just pissed off Bob.)
"word" –means talking out to other people
"word" –means talking inside the character mind or inner self
word –means that I am explaining what the character is doing, or something like that.
word –means at I am talking to you. Like in the beginning before I start the story.
Bob shook his head, smiling slowly.
"You could use a bath, greaser. And give a good working over. And we've got all night to do it. Give the kid a bath, David."
I saw Ponyboy, ducked and trying to run for it, but the Soc caught Ponyboy's arm and shoved his face into the fountain. I was frozen from , being so scared.
From the thought that Ponyboy and me would die.
Ponyboy was shouting on the top of his lungs, in the ice cold water.
Then Bob and Randy started to walk closer to me.
"I think we should help you out too." Bob said, putting out his switchblade. With a half murderess grin, and the other half, a drunken one. I grid on my switchblade, looking at Ponyboy.
He looked like he was barely moving.
"What is wrong greaser? We want to help you out, like last time."
Then images of them last time at the field…
My anger was boiling out. I run right up to the Soc, Bob. With my switchblade in front of me, hitting him with all my anger and hate to him.
Then he fell, hitting the ground. All of the other Socs ran away, leaving Ponyboy in the fountain. I moved Ponboy out of the fountain, laying him on the pavement beside the fountain.
Then my mind and body returned to me.
"I had killed someone." I started to said, "I killed him..."