Ok so this is my first fanfic ever. Please tell me if I should continue or not.
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Summary: Klaus and Caroline are dating and have been for about 5 years. They live in a huge mansion in new york with the rest of the originals. Rebekah and Caroline are best friends. Finn and Esther were killed by Rebekah before they left Mystic Falls. They are living happily now, but will that happiness last?
~The Mall~
"Sweetheart, are you done in there?" Klaus asked impatiently.
"Oh god Nik. Almost." Caroline replied
They had been at the mall all day. Caroline had begged him to come with her, and after she gave him that look with her eyes, the one that said pretty please with the cutest face ever he couldnt say no.
Caroline stepped out wearing another new outfit. This time she was wearing white skinny jeans, a nice dark blue tank top, covered in black flowers, and a black cardigan.
"How does this one look Nik" she asked Klaus while looking in the larger mirror outside the changing room.
"Wonderful" he said without even taking a glance at the outfit. He was to busy reading the texts he had got from Rebekah. Klaus and Caroline were going to join her and Kol for the night.
"You didn't even look at it." Caroline said, turning away from the mirror to face Klaus. She looked down at him, her hands on her hips.
"Im sorry love, but I am very tired from all this, we have been in this god damn mall for 5 hours now." he said looking up at her. Caroline sighed and nodded, understanding.
"Ok fine, I'll come back some other time with Rebekah." She said before going back into the changing room.
In less then 5 minutes Caroline stepped out of the changing room in her regular clothes.
"Lets go, we don't want to be late. Rebekah won't be pleased if we are late." she said. Klaus got up from the leather sofa and kissed her softly on the cheek before linking his fingers with hers. She smiled at the gesture. Even after 5 years of these gestures, they never failed to make her heart flutter.
Klaus payed the bill for the clothes she bought, and headed to the car. He opened the door to the car for Caroline and slid in right next to her. He had his arm around her waist and leaned in to kiss her but right then his phone buzzed. He was very annoyed by the interuption and Caroline couldn't help but laugh when she noticed.
It was Rebekah.
"This better be important Bekah." Klaus said, annoyance clear in his voice.
"Where are you, where is Caroline!" Rebekah yelled into the phone. Caroline's vampire senses heard her, even though she was sure it was loud enough for a human to hear.
"Calm down, she's right here. Why? What's wrong." Klaus questioned. Rebekah didn't speak for about a minute.
"Oh. Nevermind I called her and she didn't pick up. Kol has been freaking out." She said. Klaus herd her telling Kol everything was fine. But he wasnt convinced, he grabbed the phone right out of Rebekah's hand.
"Hello Nik, Give the phone to Caroline." Klaus could hear the concern in his voice. Caroline grabbed the phone right from Klaus's hand, taking it to her ear.
"Hello?" she heard Kol and Rebekah sigh in relief. Confusion hit both Caroline and Klaus' face. What was going on?
"Oh my god, Care. Your ok."
"Of course I am, what would happen. Besides Im with Nik." she told them. "Why, what's wrong?"
"Well we called you like seven times and you didn't pick up." she heard Rebekah say.
"No you didn't I never heard my phone ring." she said. She then took her side purse which was laying on the seat next to her and started searching for her phone.
"What's wrong love?" Klaus said seeing confusion on caroline's face.
"My phones missing." she said looking at him with complete confusion.
"You probably dropped it or forgot it somewhere in the mall." he assured her, she just shook her head.
"No, that's impossible. I didnt even take it out of my purse."
"Hello we are still here." Kol said through the phone. Klaus took the phone from Caroline and spoke
"Kol we will be home in five minutes, talk to you then."
"but i-" he cut the call.
"Love, i'll get you another one tomorrow. ok?" He said. She replied with a nod. He kissed her forehead and told the driver to hurry up.
~The Mikaelson Manor~
"James, bring the bags upstairs." Klaus told the driver. Him and Caroline made their way up the stairs, but all of a sudden Caroline stopped walking.
"What's wrong, sweetheart?" Klaus asked coming to stand infront of her. She looked around everywhere. Klaus held her hand and then she came back to reality.
"Nothing i just thought i saw something." she smiled.
"Your delusional love." he said while guiding her through the main doors.
~The living room~
"Caroline!" Rebekah called out from the hallway. Before she could turn around, Rebekah was in front of her. She pulled here into a tight embrace.
"Ok Rebekah, that's enough." she said choking on how tight her best friend was holding her.
"Sorry, i was just worried." she said pulling away and just holding her shoulders. Before she could say anything Kol walked into the room and hugged Caroline.
"Care, your ok." he said while squeezing her even tighter.
"Ok that's enough, will someone tell me whats going on?" klaus asked. He could see Rebekah was extremely worried and Kol was always worried about Caroline, sometimes a little too much. Kol finally let go of Caroline. Klaus walked over to Caroline, standing closer to her.
"Nothing Nik, i just felt something wrong." Rebekah told Klaus
"What do you mean Beks?" asked Caroline.
"Well love, Rebekah was a witch before she was turned. And every now and then she kind of senses problems. Like when Esther came back." He told her. He was standing next to her, his arm around her.
"Yea but this time it was a different feeling." she told him. "Like trouble is coming, but not just for us but mostly for Caroline. she said.
Caroline snuggled closer to Klaus. He smiled when he saw her scared face.
"Dont worry love, Rebekah is just being delusional." he told trying to get her to relax
"Am not!"
"Ok well you two can argue about this later." Kol finally said "Right now we have to go out."
"Where are we going?" asked Caroline
"Gloria opened a new place here. She told us to come and check it out." Rebekah said standing up from the sofa and going to Caroline.
"But first i want to see what you bought." Rebekah said excited and took Caroline to her room.
~Glorias~
It had only been an hour since they had arrived and Kol had already found someone to spend the night with.
Klaus was standing at the bar, with Caroline and Rebekah on either side of him. Rebekah was already drunk but not enough for her.
"Nik" said Rebekah getting Klaus to turn around to face her.
"Yes?" he asked. All she did was look over his shoulder. And then she continued
"You have to promise not to be mad and kill someone today."
"Why would i do that?" he said sipping his scotch
"Because there are five guys checking out Caroline behind you." she said
He immediately turned around ready to rip off the heads of the people that had the nerve to look at Caroline in that way. But caroline hopped off the stool and stood in front of him.
"No Nik, not here." she said looking at him with that sparkle in her big blue eyes.
"Fine." he said with anger. but Caroline still just smiled. He put an arm around her waist and pulled her closer to him, and kissed her passionatly. Her arms went around to the back of his neck and tugged at his hair.
"eh ehm." Rebekah said from behind them. Klaus growled and turned around.
"You know you have the worst timing." he told her and all she did was smile. Caroline couldnt hold her laughter back.
"I know." she said and went back to her drinking.
Another three hours passed. Kol was way to busy with the human that was with him, and Rebekah was totally wasted.
She and Caroline had been dancing for the two whole hours. Caroline came back to Klaus at the counter.
"Nik" she said slowly wrapping her arms around him
"I know, your tired." he said twirling them so that Caroline was leaning on the counter and he had his arms around her waist.
"Lets leave, shall we." he asked kissing her cheek. She replied with a nod. They headed for the door when he saw something standing behind them in the window reflection he turned around immediately.
"Whats wrong?" Caroline asked with her hand on his shoulder while he looked around.
"Nothing, I jus- nothing. Lets go sweetheart." He didn't want to worry her for no reason. He put his arm around her in such a gentle way, that she could tell he was worried.
~The Mikealson Manor~
"Niklaus, is that you?" they heard as they came through the main door.
"Yes Elijah it's me." Klaus said as Elijah came from the living room door.
"Ok, good. We need to discuss someth-" Elijah was cut off by Klaus's worried face.
"What's wrong Nik" asked Caroline, as Klaus pulled her closer to him.
"Somene's been here."
Ok so sorry if i suck, but this is my first fanfic ever. Please don't be too harsh. Please let me know what you thought, and if i should continue. Please review :)
edited: 25/06/2012
ok guys i just read over my first chapter after so long, and omg is my writing bad. My writing improves after this chapter. I compared this chapter to my latest chapter(chapter 24), and my writing is so different and better. So please don't be harsh or think i am a bad writer, it is just the first and second chapter, the ones after have much better writing and grammar. :)
And p.s. lots of people ask me what my favourite chapters are from this whole ff. I have to say chapters 10-the latest must be my favourite. :)