Hi guys! I decided to just spend about 3 days of my life re watching EVERY SINGLE Star Wars the Clone Wars episode ever made (plus the movie) and I remembered how FREAKING DISAPPOINTING the last season was in comparison to the rest of the series (sorry, I absolutely despise the last season. They brought back Darth Maul... and he was in it for maybe four episodes _) But anyways, I remembered how awesome the other seasons were and I'm like 'I'm gonna write another SW fanfic!' So I did.
I was looking back on my past fanfictions and I'm always left cringing at some of the pieces I wrote. I decided to rewrite ALL of my SW fanfictions to see the difference! I hope you enjoy it! (Btw, I'm not going to rewrite 'what if the snipers shot was meant for Anakin' because it was discontinued)
So yeah! Be ready! I'm starting with 'wrong decision' (my first fanfic!)
Wrong Decision (rewritten)
Obi Wan Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker, and Ahsoka Tano stood in the council chambers. They were being briefed on an upcoming mission to help rebels against the Separatists.
"You three will go to the Mesonian system. Once there, you'll report daily on your progress." The three nodded at Mace's orders. "You'll leave in an hour, be in the hanger bay in forty five minutes. May the force be with you."
Obi Wan, Anakin, and Ahsoka bowed in respect and walked out of the Council chambers. Once outside, Obi Wan went off to his own chambers, while Anakin and Ahsoka headed to theirs.
"Master?"
Anakin looked down at his padawan, "yeah, Snips?"
"If it's just to help the rebels on Mesonia, why do you think the council is sending three Jedi?"
"Mesonia is an important planet, and it would give us an advantage in the war. We can't let the Separatists take over it."
They walked into their chambers and began to pack the small amount of things they would need on the mission. "That still doesn't explain why they need to send three Jedi, especially when our numbers are decreasing."
"We don't know how bad the conflict is there. It's basically a precautionary measure. It's happened before, Snips."
Ahsoka nodded, accepting the answer. Soon, they headed for the hanger bay.
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Obi Wan, Anakin, and Ahsoka landed on Mesonia without any problems, which rarely happened. They reached a small outpost surrounded by lush forest. There, they met a tall, lanky man with copper hair.
"Greetings, Jedi. I am Clint Genca, the leader here. It's an honor to have you here, and we thank you for coming on such short notice."
"Hello, I'm Obi Wan Kenobi; this is Anakin Skywalker and his padawan, Ahsoka Tano."
Clint nodded in respect.
"So, what's happening with the Separatists?" Anakin asked.
"They've overrun all the main towns. We were forced to flee into the forests, but multiple attacks split the population up all over the region. We have contact with one other group, and we're working on regrouping."
"How far is the other group?" Ahsoka questioned.
Clint emitted a sigh as he stared into the brush to the west. "That's the problem; they are over four miles away and in between, there is a small droid outpost. That's why it's so hard to regroup. The droids know where we are, they're just trying to find all the rest of the groups so they can launch a full scale attack."
"I now see the whole precautionary measure thing." Ahsoka murmured to Anakin, receiving a nod in response.
"That's why we're here. Tomorrow we can try to get to the other base. From there, Anakin, Ahsoka, and I will split up and look for other groups." Obi Wan replied.
"We can't thank you enough for thi-" Clint was cut off by an ear splitting back, followed by heat and the smell of smoke.
Not bad for how little I had in the first chapter, right? I mean, seriously. My first chapter in the original was PITIFUL.
Review and tell me your thoughts :)