This is a story I thought would be really fun to write. Here's a preview if what I have written, If I get positive feedback I'll keep going.
What Lies Underneath
Full Summary:
Bella Swan could be described in many ways. The way a boy thinks of her is completely different from the girls. Boys would describe her as sexy, alluring, fun, easy, drop dead gorgeous, and amazing in bed. The girls would describe her as a bitch, whore, and any other curse word in the books. But what made Bella Swan like this? What was her past, no one knows. Edward Cullen hates everything the school "bombshell" Bella Swan is. He wants a long and honest relationship. And who could bring these two to meet except Edward's cousin, Alice? Not the classic the meet and fall in love, I guarantee it. Ha-ha technically it is quite the opposite from that.
Start of Story:
Flashback; as I walked through the sullen double doors, I knew I wouldn't be noticed. I took a deep breath and pushed through the doors. The tiled floor squeaked under my worn Converse. No one in this godforsaken hallway even spared me a passing glance. I pushed my glasses farther up on my face, trying to hid behind the wide lenses, and made my way down the hallway to my locker. I put up the books I wouldn't need for my next couple periods as fast as I could, trying to avoid the unavoidable.
To my left were the cheerleaders, when they saw me it all started again, and – once again- I just had to look up at them.
"Hey Brace-face," The tallest blonde, Erin, sneered at me, her flawless white teeth a startling contrast to the deep red lipstick.
"Four-eyes," The shortest blonde, Lexi, smirked as I looked enviously at her clear blue eyes.
"Nobody," The leader of the group, Anna, said condescendingly as she jabbed me with her perfectly manicured nail.
"He-chick," Kayla, the brunette, curvy bombshell told me as she looked up and down my less than curvy body with a raised eyebrow and a condescending smile.
"Loser," I didn't look back to see who had made that last comment as I scurried away from the girly, high-pitched giggles behind me, my books clutched close to my nonexistent chest.
These were the most common punches thrown at me. Even though I would never show it bothered deep down each time I was called that, a cut bore down deep in me. Their words swam in my brain and consumed my thoughts until I couldn't even see straight.
I'm going to finish "Kidnapped" before I write much more for this. But Before I keep going I need to know whether or not it's worth a damn.
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