This is a slightly dark fanfic about the straw hat pirates with Luffy and Law as Co-captains. Both are taken in by Rayleigh when tragedy strikes them. This will be Fem Luffy so you've been warned.

Part one: Luffy


"Gah!" Luffy cried out as she grabbed in a world filled with smoke and the smell of burnt flesh in the air. The Grey Terminal was being burnt to Ashes and Luffy lost her way out after the bandits she trusted disappeared. They went to fast for her and for all she new both of her brothers were dead. She felt half death when the arm wrapped around her.

"A little girl shouldn't be in such a bad situation." An old man told Luffy as he took her to the edge of the sea and away from the smoke. Luffy passed out in the stranger's arms when she saw that the smoke cleared.

"Hmm, that hat. I wonder why you have it?" Rayleigh said as he placed the little girl on the bed in his docked boat. He was feeling bored and decided to see the weakest Blue where his captain came from. It was a good thing he stopped or the little girl would be dead in the swarm of fire and smoke.

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"Where am I?" Luffy asked as she woke up looking for Ace and Sabo before her mind cleared.

"My brothers I have to save them; I have to go." Luffy said as she stood up and fell face forward to the ground.

"Ow" she muttered as the old man laughed.

"You shouldn't move so fast but that place is destroyed," the old man told Luffy as he looked at her.

"But Ace!" Luffy tried again but failed. Why was she so weak? Luffy started to cry.

"Hmm, what wrong?" Rayleigh asked a little anxious at seeing her cry.

"Why am I so weak, I want to get stronger to protect my brothers but both left me, why?" Luffy asked Rayleigh.

"Hmm, I don't know but I can train you to be stronger if you wish, but you'll have to come with me, I can't stay in a place too long or I'll get caught." He smiled at her.

"But Ace might be alive, but I want strength and Sabo…" Luffy trailed off before exclaiming. "Why does thinking hurt!" and Rayleigh laughed at her. It is your decision but I need to leave soon.

"Will I really get strong? Strong enough to be the pirate King?" Luffy asked.

"hmm, know why do you want that?" Rayleigh asked.

"I promised Shanks I would become a great pirate, and the man with the most freedom is the pirate king." Luffy said as she sparkled with thoughts of her hero shanks.

'you really put him on a pedestal huh' Rayleigh thought as she said how cool and amazing Shanks was.

"You will become strong This I can promise you and I can throw a note in a bottle into the forest for your brothers if their alive." Rayleigh said with a smile.

"Oh okay, thanks Old man." Luffy said with a smile.

"My name is Rayleigh; you can call me Rayleigh-sensei."

"Okay Rayleigh" Luffy said and Rayleigh only shook his head smiling as he threw the bottle into the trees and it conveniently landed in ASL treehouse.

Luffy's Note:

Sabo & Ace,

I going to train somewhere to become Pirate King.

Love you,

Luffy

P.S. Future king of the Pirates


Part 2: Law


"Corozon" Law wheezed out with tears spilling out of his eyes. Doflamingo was sure to find him soon and his savor was gone.

"Hey" Law looked up and saw a girl slightly younger than him smiling at him.

"Why are you alone, you wanna join my pirate crew?" Luffy asked him with a smile and he looked at her flabbergasted. She was shinning somehow with flower behind her head.

"Luffy, what are you doing?'" Rayleigh called out to her.

"I found someone, can I keep him." Luffy asked.

"Don't decide for me!" Law shouted at her but the malice was somewhat lost with the shakes he still had from crying so much.

"hmm, Boy. You want to become stronger?" Rayleigh asked as he looked at the small boy.

"I want him on my crew, I know he'll be awesome." Luffy said and Law just stared at them shocked.

"hmm, if you follow I'll train you with Luffy. If you don't that's fine." Rayleigh said as he began to walk off and Luffy followed him and looked back to see Law following and she giggled.

"I'm Luffy and I'm going to be the king of the pirates." She said and he frowned.

"You're a girl, you will be queen not king." He corrected her and her head tilted.

"Hmm, but who will be king?" Luffy questioned.

"I will, we can be Co-Captains If you want to start a crew." Law said as he looked at Luffy. He would join her she shined to him and that was something he wanted to be with but he didn't know why.

"Hah Hah HA" Rayleigh Laughed and smiled at his brats.

"What inspiring youngsters. I'll definitely train you well." He said smiling at the two before they disappeared off the face of the earth for those who were looking for them.


part 3: Garp and Doflamingo


"WAh!" Garp cried onto Sengoko's shoulder as he came back from training Ace.

"What is wrong with you bafoon." Sengoko yelled when Garp hit his last nerve.

"My darling Granddaughter is dead. I let her down. I didn't make her strong enough to survive this world. I should have been harsher. Wah. Now she can never become a strong marine." Garp went on and on and though Sengoku understood. A crying Garp was a pain in his ass.

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"Where is that brat," Doflamingo stormed around because his precious fruit was gone now and so was the little scape goat. Law. The little brat. How was he to be immortal now. He flipped a desk in rage.


training


Law: 10

Luffy: 9

"Luffy run faster." Law yelled as they ran from an elephant. They needed an attack plan.

"Hmn" Luffy said as she sped up and passed Law making Law's eye widen in wonder. He can't let her beat him. Never.

"Gomo Gomo no rope" Luffy shouted as she flung herself and Law onto of the raging elephant.

"Luffy, WHY?!" Law yelled as they struggled to hand on before he used his Op Op fruit and transported them to safety.

"Sorry Law, " Luffy apologized as he scolded her for making their training worse before Rayleigh came after them with a club.

"No hiding, you must face your enemies with full force." He shouted.

"Hai"Both Luffy and Law Shouted as they went after the raging elephant once more.

"Gear 2 ?" Law asked as both experimented with their devil fruit abilities and talked to each other on techniques to improve their techniques.

"mhmm, I think it'll me in tougher situation." Luffy said

"I see. I need to work on my Op op abilities."

"Maybe work on widening it or making it last longer?" Luffy suggested and Law hummed.

"my darling pupils, they are so much smarter than I give them credit for." Rayleigh cried as they continued their discussion and experiments.

Law: 11

Luffy:10

"Alright time to learn Haki" Rayleigh decided as he blind folded his students and grabbed a stick.

"what is Haki?' they questioned.

"Observation Haki will help you tell when something is coming at you, so try to avoid my attacks, you'll learn eventually. Will do this one first."

"Ah!" Luffy shouted as the stick struck her.

"Luff-Ah" Law followed after before they started to understand it better.

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"lets work on armament Haki it'll help as well" Rayleigh said as he taught the Haki techniques with the help of lions.

"Law" Luffy said with a smile.

"Hmm, lets go" Law said as they continued fighting.

Law:13

Luffy:12

"alright time for a test battle" Rayleigh said as blind folded them both and told them to fight each other. It was a draw.

" I wanted to beat Law." Luffy whined as she laid down exhausted next to Law.

"Me too." Law muttered

"Haha my you have grown."

Law: 15

Luffy:14

"Lets go" Luffy said as both her and Law attacked Rayleigh with what he taught them. He smiled at them as the battle went on. He looked at them like they were his kids now.

"we did it." Law said surprised as Rayleigh fell on the ground and Law held a sword to his throat.

"we did?" Luffy said excited.

"not too much" Rayleigh said as he tossed the sword away and pinned both of the teenagers.

"you should never celebrate until the enemy is gone. A premature victory can kill you." Rayleigh said before offering to make dinner for them.

"Yay meat!" Luffy cheered.

"No bread." Law reminded even though he didn't need to.

"Hai"

Law: 18

Luffy: 16

"bye Rayleigh" Luffy said as she hugged him as she and Law got a ship and set out on there adventure. He smiled at them.

"Bye Luffy, Law. Have a grand adventure, and visit me I'll be rambling about as usual." He laughed and Law smiled a bit as he got a log pose out and he and Luffy set sail to find their adventure.


Disclaimer: of course I own nothing its all Oda's