Can you tell who's POV this is? Can you tell who it's about? Pretty obvious tbh…
Inspired by a few quotes from the Manga - unfortunately I can't recall the exact chapter.
What are you thinking of, on your own?
What burden are you bearing, all alone?
I cannot help but notice the way he slinks around,
Hands in pockets, shoulders hunched; head always facing down.
He barely lifts his legs, feet scuffing on the ground.
His face is hard and vacant, like he's somewhere far away.
His eyes are always hooded, warning you to stay away.
His lips turn to a scowl; there's something he wants to say.
What are you thinking of, on your own?
What burden are you bearing, all alone?
Good? Bad? Magnificent? Magnificently suckish? Let me know, drop a comment. One word, a paragraph, I just want some feed back!
Thinking of making a second part to this, but wait! From A Different Character POV! Whoa, your mind has been blown!
Keep Safe, Be Happy
Lisee xx
Let it commence!
I've found it, so taper bright,
Squeaking balloons burst delight.
It illuminates the darkest hall,
Crook, and crevice, big and small.
It found me, the blackest stone,
It thawed my chest, it made a home
For happiness to roost and nest,
And all my troubles put to rest.
Festival lanterns, light the sky.
Flying relief, floating sighs.
Riddles and wishes, both alike
Niceties, uncertainties, our choices are right?
My choice is sure, my choice is just,
Probing deeper than the obvious lustre
A shiny shell with a burning core,
That I shall claim, forevermore.
Not so satisfied with this one :S
Okay peeps, don't be nice, I want you to give me a harsh criticism of this poem because I REALLY need to tune it up. That's right, I'm REQUESTING Constructive Flames DUN DUN DUN!
Love you all, MWAH! MWAH!
Lisee xx