Important back-story:
Hello people reading what I am typing at this moment in time. What's up? So, I've been sitting on this "thought" for a while, and I wanna see what can happen with it.
Hopefully, we've all read The final Warning… for those of you who haven't… too bad. Ah, the 4th book. The book between the 2 most amazing installments (so far) of Maximum Ride. The book all about global warming and blah. Well, something in this book beyond the global warming speeches bugs me. Okay, actually there are quite a few things that bother me about this book, but there is one thing in particular. At the end of chapter 33, you get a recap of Dr. Martinez taking out the chip, right? Max talks about saying quote, "Some stupid stuff she said to Fang" and then, it gets better, the very last sentence is "Fang had never said that stupid stuff back to me"
Now, am I the only person who finds something wrong with that statement? Let's look at the facts, shall we? In order for Fang to say that stupid stuff back to her, 1 of 3 things would have happened.
If Max and Fang would have been able to discuss what was said while under valium, which is already unlikely, Fang would have to be totally out of character and say, "Yeah, that stuff is true for me too. I just wasn't drugged up enough to say it out loud."
Fang would have to say that stuff back to her while she was under, which would also be unlikely. "I'm so glad that you finally admitted it. I love you too. And really, I don't mind that you had to be under VALIUM to have to tell me." Really? Then, what we he do if she didn't remember? Or if she did?
And finally… HE would have to be under to say that stuff back to her in the same context. And what are the chances of that? Slim to none. So why does JP even make a point of it? Hmm?
I realize that a lot of the stuff above is ranting. Throwing what I think in your faces. But I know some of you agree with me. Others, maybe not.
The reason for all of this ranting is simple. I want to do a "story" (hate calling it that) that consists of 3 separate one shots; each pertaining to my rant above. One for each scenario. I wanna see what it would look like if any one of those three things above were to actually happen. What would the reactions be?
Anyone interested, keep this is mind. I'll be updating soon. For those of you totally against this… close this internet page and never look back.
Peace.