Disclaimer: I am very sad to announce:I do not own Naruto nor Sasuke … so sad… but I do own this plot though…:)

Warnings: YAOI! so if you don't like it DO NOT READ IT. . ehhh…Sasuke? Well, he isn't polite you know :) well, that's kinda it, for this one.

Note: I think I should tell you that here Naruto is 18 and Sasuke is 19. for the plots' sake. All their age is also changes accordingly.

AN: so, I got an awesome review today from the amazing marbear2795 and so, I'm revisiting this story re-editing it as I go. I hope it improves at least a bit ;) so, dear marbear2795 this re-edit is for You ;)

"Hey, Bastard! I said HEY, stop! "A blonde-haired boy ran towards a raven-haired one and asked with a cheerful grin on his face:

"Wanna go get some ramen? My treat…"- raven rolled his eyes and gave an exasperated sigh:

"It's never your treat…"- glancing at the cheery kid he added-" Dobe."- and smirked when he saw the other pout.

"Oh come on! I'm really hungry… Teme… pretty please?" – raven's eyes went wide and he cursed.

"Oh, no! Don't you dare make those puppy eyes at me AGAIN!"- he growled and, shoving his hands down his pockets a second later conceded.-"...oh alright already… let's go…"

"Yeah! Puppy eyes power!"- the sunshine haired boy grinned-" Thank you thank you thank you!" –taller ninja smirked from the blondes enthusiasm, and walked towards the Ramen shop his friend trailing closely behind him.

After, like a seventh or eight, Sasuke has really lost count at this point, bowl of ramen blonde ninja sighed satisfied:

"Ah… I'm f… ehh… I mean I'm a little fuller…"

"Oh, so you want some more?" – raven's smirk grew wider when he saw the horror crossing his friends' beautiful features-"If so, then please, Dobe, be my guest. I'll order you some more, after all, no need for you to starve now is there…"

"No! Ehh thanks Teme, there's no need for that."-he smiled sheepishly.-" Okayyyy… sooo, what do you wanna do now?"- a sly smirk crossed ravens face.

"How about some training. Huh, Dobe? I mean, heaven knows, you could surely use some…"- Naruto frowned.

"Eh, sure, but why are you lookin' at me like that?"- he asked hesitantly and Sasuke raised a challenging eyebrow at him.

"Like what, am I looking at you, exactly?"

"Like a wolf which just saw a tasty lamb."- was Naruto's immediate response and Sasuke chuckled inwardly.

"No, of course not. What are you, nuts? I would say like a wolf to a… a bunny. Cute, fluffy… you know?"-he started smirking again and Naruto paled visibly.

"(gulp) a… a… a… how about… no training for today, eh Sasuke? I am kinda…feeling a bit um… tired?"

"Why? Got scared?"-teasing. Always works with this one, Sasuke smirked mentally when…wait for it...aaaaaaaaand:

"Scared? Hah! Don't dream in a day!" (A/N: huh? Is that even a sentence Oo?)

"Sooo… we're going training?"

"As hell we are! NOW!"- raven ninja just rolled his eyes- it's really too easy to manipulate this guy sometimes…

(…) in the training area in the depths of the forest…

After three hours of brutal fighting, they were stopped by two cheerful voices:

"Sasuke-kun!~"

"Naruto-kun!~"

Both guys sighed- they hated to be disturbed in a middle of their training… *cough* fight *cough*.

"Yo, Sakura-chan, Hinata-chan!" – greeted Naruto, as cheerful as always.

"Hn."- 'said' a very pissed Sasuke. (A/N: he's always like that, do not mind him.)

"Sooo…what are you two doin'?"- after an awkward moment of silence asked a pink-haired, pink dressed and even pink smelling creature in front of them.

"What does it look like, huh?"- growled Sasuke, mad, that his "training" with Naruto was interrupted in such a rude way. He just wanted to get back to what they were doing, in other words, to enjoy the feeling of him and Naruto pressed close together…touching…feeling how Naruto's muscles flexe with his every move…seeing how his eyes glint when he concentrates on figuring what Sasuke will do next… he suddenly felt silent as he was absorbed by his day-dream. A very naughty one at that too...so naughty that it ended in not beaten, but writhing Naruto, screaming Sasuke's name to heavens above when he came…

"Emm… Naruto, why is Sasuke-kun so mad?"- asked Sakura watching Sasuke with worried eyes.

"Cuz you interrupted our figh… ehh… training…"-Naruto smiled sheepishly.

''Naruto-kun…"

"Oh, hey there, Hinata, how are you?"-said girl blushed deeply. (A/N: she likes him very much you know…well, too bad for her… che che che.)

"Great, you?"- he asked not noticing her shyness one bit. He's dense like that. Well anyway…

"NARUTO!"- seemed like Sasuke snapped out of his day-dreaming and had very well just thought of a way to make it into reality. No wonder he was a bit eager.

"Eh … yeah, Teme?"- Naruto focused his attention back to his friend instantly, forgetting the girls that were still standing right there.

"TRAINING. GO. NOW!"- growled Sasuke, sending a heated glare towards the girls for good measure.

"Ehh… bye girls…"- Naruto scratched his head sheepishly before turning away from them and following Sasuke who was by then, far into the forest.

"Huh? Hey, stop you guys!"- both girls shouted in unison, but… both ninjas were already gone… (A/N: fast runners, these boys… :) )

(…) couple more hours later, even deeper into the forest.

"Why were you so mad at them earlier?"- asked blonde nin trying to avoid an incoming attack.

"Cuz we were *punch* training. I don't like being *kick* disturbed while I'm *smack* training."- answered Sasuke matter-of-factly.

"But… *block* why..? *block* *block* *block*…

"Cuz… I don't like it."

"Oh, that's just pure genius, Teme!- snorted Naruto rolling his eyes. A mistake. -" *wazap* OUCH! BASTARD!"

Evil Sasukes laugh fills the air and… *KABOOM* Naruto attacks Sasuke, Sasuke attacks Naruto and they both quickly find themselves on the ground, powerless, breathless and way too tired to move even an inch after such a long battle…

"Hey, Sasu?" –whispered Naruto, still trying to catch his breath.

"Why are you whispering, Dobe?"- asked Sasuke not even bothering to open his eyes and look at his blonde rival.

"I… I …"- now Sasuke does open his eyes and throws Naruto a quick glance.

"What?" – he asked, starting to worry that maybe he smacked the blond around a bit too much.

"Nothing…"

"(sigh) don't piss me of. What is it?"- asked Sasuke actually sitting up to look at Naruto clearly.

"I'm… really.. tired and…"- Naruto yawns loudly and continues-"… hungry… but tired more than hungry so… I think… I'll just sleep here tonight…"- he finishes and rolls into a bal on the ground leaving Sasuke gaping.

"Wha-… wake up, you moron! I said *punch* wake the fuck up! If you don't, you'll… you'll wake up in my bed tomorrow!''

''Good then… 'night Teme…"- and with a satisfied look on his face, Naruto felt asleep, leaving Sasuke quite numb with shock.

"Wha…?"- (A/N: very intelligent Sasuke :D )- "Dobe? You sleeping? … … … Oh well."- he shrugged and got up to go home… with a sleeping boy in his arms.

There… re-re-re-edited Oo I wonder if it's any better . do let me know what you think ^.^