Chapter 1: The Making
Okay this is my first FF ever! Please review and tell me your thoughts. So excited so here is the first chapter to Before Bella.
EDWARD'S Point of view
I was always cold, but the type of cold where your whole body burned from being so cold. It started at my fingertips a few days ago. It quickly spread throughout my arm all the way to my toes. It was an unpleasant sensation. Not that you could imagine me enjoying anything anymore! Well except for my beloved doctor: . He is practically my father now.
I also ached everywhere I guess losing my parents and having the Spanish influenza really can drive a person bonkers. Oh excuse my manners my name is Edward. I am 17 years old. I have the Spanish blahh blahh disease but half the country does to. So I don't feel that special. The nurses explain to me why im so achy and cold. But I really don't care because I know I'm not going to live for very long.
I heard the nurses talking in low whispers about how unlucky I am and how many wonderful suitors would have loved me. All because of my looks ughh sometimes I wish I looked like a normal person. I also know I'm different because I hear people talking when they're not actually saying the words out loud. Its quote a peculiar thing but it only happens for a few seconds at a time. IT SCARED ME TO DEATH! Before I can go on with my rant came in and shut the door.
This is odd I thought. never came to visit me during the day. Today he had a grim look on his face as if seeing me made him sick to his stomach. " Carlisle what's wrong?" Oh yeah he asked me to call him Carlisle, well at least when addressing him. He replied "Edward you know you are like a son to me and you know how sick you are." He toke a deep breath before continuing. " Well I haven't been completely honest about what exactly I am." Wait what is he talking about is he not human. What how is that possibly? He had said my name several times before capturing my attention again. " What do you mean Carlisle? Are you not human?" I murmured. " Edward if you would pay attention you would understand! Well I was human but was changed into a… vampire." After the realization hit me I went bug eyed. He still went on "Edward I know what your thinking but you have to believe me. Also I want you to live and the only way is for me to change you into a vampire. You would be my son."
It shocked me that he would want me as his son. I also wanted to live. So I agreed and he was shocked by my answer.
"Yes Carlisle I would love to be your son because I already consider you as my father. So do whatever you have to. I trust you."
His face broke out into a blasting 100-watt smile. "Great but I have to take you away from all the humans before I change you." I asked "Why?" He replied with a smirk. "Well because you will be making a lot of noise and once the change is done you will have an undying urge wait wrong word thirst for blood. But may I warn you I am not like many vampires." His smirk returned with that thought. " What I mean is that I don't drink Human blood only animal. Like a vegetarian if you know what I mean." He chuckles to himself. "So lets get you out of here Edward." He carried me as if I weighed nothing towards the exit at a very fast speed.
It almost made me puke but I hadn't been able to eat more than a few spoonfuls of pudding. Thank god for that! I hadn't noticed that we where in middle of the street going faster then a car. We where heading east towards the woods.
We traveled for about 20 minutes.
We came to a very spacious cabin. He set me down on a huge canopy bed. It was gold with a rustic tint to it. The cabin itself was amazing. It had an old timey feeling to it he said he would cook me a delicious last meal and turn me.
Okay I know its kind of short but my first chapter ever! Please R&R.