Okay so basically I'm doing another commentary on My Immortal (Not that it hasn't been done billions and billions of times) because I am bored. And honestly, I have a lot of crap to say about this. SO here goes nothing!

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) lol ur funny... not really. 2 my gf (ew not in that way Well you thought it...) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. Apparently she recieved no help for the AN.U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! Poor Justin... what did he ever do to you?.MCR ROX! NO! We actually have something in common! D:

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way At least it's only four names... But really? Ebony, Darkness, AND Raven? We get it. and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) no shit sherlock! with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears WTF are limpid tears? and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). I know who she is and I'm pretty sure you don't look like her!I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. Because incest is just SO MUCH BETTER than not being related. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. Cool. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. Again, NO SHIT! I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing and here is where the REAL torture starts. a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink because pink is so fukking goffik fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, why do you need white foundation if you have pale skin anyway? black eyeliner and red eye shadow. Read my lips. I Don't. Fucking. Give. A Shit. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining Sleeting? so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them. Oh, your a classy one, aren't you?

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was... Draco Malfoy! FINALLY THIS MAKES SENSE WHY IT'S IN THE HARRY POTTER SECTION!

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly. Shyly? SHYLY? What Draco are you talking about? The Draco I know is a dickhead.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away. I have to say, that was some pretty epic dialogue.

AN: IS it good? NO! PLZ tell me fangz! Saying fangz instead of thanks doesn't make you goth. It makes you an idiot.

Okay, that was... I actually have no words for that! She is so... again... no words... this was just so horrible. Ohmygod.

Next chapter up... assoon as I get it done. Maybe todayy, maybe 3 weeks from now. You'll never know...

R&R! PLEASE!