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Marinate runs across the crowded plaza, a stolen piece of bread in hand. She looks back to see the city guards running after her. She picks up her spead, her blue bell pigtails flapping against the wind.
"Get back here!" An angry voice yells behind her.
Marinate turns again and see's more gards now.
'All this for a piece of bread' she thinks to herself.
She looks around for anything that might her her, and see's a monkey with red fur on top of a building pointing to A merchant stand canopy upahead.
"If you say so." she muttered under her breath
Marinate pushed herself up, using the merchant stand post, onto the canopy. She jumped from the canopy to the nearest window. The stands owner curseing her out for tilting his stand. "Sorry." she yelled down at him once she was safely inside.
Marinate looked around the room she was in and nostised it was full of paints and a halfnaked redhead blblushing at her. "Sorry!" Marinate yepled looking away form him. "I'll just let myself out." she said running out the door.
She was running on the roof top still being chased bye the gards the monkey riding her shoulders. Marinate saw the gape between the buildings and was about to do the stupidest thing in her life.
"Hold on tight Alya." Marinate said to the monkey.
She replied by raping her tail around Marinate.
They reached the end of the building with the gards right behind them. "Looks like your time is up missey." The biggest one said pulling out his sowred. "I could always over look this and could come work for me." he added and the other gards laughed.
"No thanks I rather like my dignity thank you very much." Marinate said putting the loaf of bread in mouth. She turned and jumped.
Her hands just barely grasped onto the side of building befor her body knocked into the wall. The wind was knocked out of her and she let the bread go. Luckily Alya caught the bread before it could fall.
"Thanks." Marinate said though strangeled breath. She recovered fast and pushed her slef up the building and ran.
Marinate finally stoped running when she desieded that the were safe. She climbed down to the alley the were above and floped down on the ground.
"Nice work today Alya." Marinate said tearing off a piece of the loaf and gave it to the little monkey who happily bit into it.
Marinate was about to bite into her piece when she heard a cry. She looked over and saw a little girl no older than seven curled up in a ball. Marinate walked over to the girl a crouched down next to her.
"Hey what's wrong? " She aked kindly. "I'm hungry." the girl wailed. "It's ok." she said drying the girls tears. "I'm Marinate, what's your name?" "Manon." she said.
"Well Manon you can have my bread." Marinate said offering the piece. Manon's eyes went wide "Really." Marinate nodded. Manaon gabed the bread and flung her arms around Marinate. "Thank you!" she said the skiped off with Marinates stolen bread.
Alaya offered Marinate the rest of her bread. She smiled down at the little monkey and ate the rest of the bread. Then they both wlaked out the alley.
Marinate and Alaya walked down the narrow streets of the city avoiding the guards. They soon got caught up in a crowd. Marinate wanted to see what all the commotion was about so she climbed onto of a broken beam to look.
She saw the most beautiful carriage she has ever seen, not like she has seen many carriages. It was pianted an orange that looked like a sunset that was trimmed in rose gold, and the horses had tassels and fringe on their bridles.
"I heard that she is prince Adrins bride." Said a man in the crowd
"Really another one?" Said the woman next to him.Marinate couldn't care less about the gossip, because saw Manon be pushed into the street in front of the carriage.
Marinate rushed forward not carring that people screamed at her as she pushed by. Alya climbed the carriage and was trying to make the driver stop. Marinate ran out the street and cover Manon waiting for the hit but never came.
She looked up and saw the carriage was inches away from her face. The street was silent as Marinate picked Manon up carrying her to the other side of the road.
The carriage door opened revealing I blond woman and a sparkly yellow dress to tight around the waist. She made her way over to Marinate and smiled. Then she smacked Marinate so hard she fell to the ground.
"Ugly street rat." The woman said spitting at her then got back into her carriage.
Marinate rubbed her cheak while she gleard with disdain at the carriage as it strood into the palace gates.
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