Finn's POV
Where are we? The last thing I remember was fighting Ice King. Speaking of him, where as he gone?
I stood up and took a good look around.
"Whoa," I said. We are DEFINITELY not in Ooo anymore. I saw Jake stand up too, and he gasped in amazement.
"Dude, where are we?"
I shrugged. This place seems odd… And then suddenly we heard leaves rustle. We glanced at a batch of leaves that formed some sort of gate way. Out went a middle-aged woman, and judging by her look, she was shocked. Maybe it's our weird clothes or the way Jake stands on two legs-Oh no.
"Who are you?"
I stuttered, but Jake, being the immature dog he was, answered with hyper in his voice, "Hey old lady. I'm Jake and this is my bro Finn,"
"I see," she said, somewhat in disbelief.
"Uh… we best-we best be going home…" I said nervously.
"Very well," she answered with suspicion and then left with a last glance at us.
Suddenly, a guy my age bumped into me and the impact hurt a lot, o it made me shout "Ouch! Watch where you're going-"
He seemed to be panicking. Without another word, he ran away and vanished. After that, a group of palace guards approached us.
"You two," a man, who appears to be the captain, points his finger at us harshly, "did you happen to see a man carrying a satchel?"
"We have, I think he went that way..." I answered (Jake was in dog form) and then pointed at the direction the guy went.
"Thank you," he said, "if we will find him we shall send our compliments to you, noble soldier (I think he saw my sword)..."
"Okay," I said as the guards rode away on their horses.
"This place is weird," Jake said once we were out of earshot.
I tried to lean on the batch of leaves (forgetting they were, you know, leaves and not a stone wall) and then fell backwards into a cave-like corridor.
"Whoa," Jake exclaimed.
"Yeah, man." I said, "look at that tower!"
"Do you think the Ice King is in there with a princess?" he asked.
I shrugged. "Let's go see,"
So I used my sword to climb up because Jake here is too tired and he said he'd rather wait down there and go if there's an emergency.
After reaching the high window (which was the only entrance), I panted for breath and held on to the pane. Using my sword, I pulled myself up and collapsed into the floor.
"Hello?"
Then I felt a frying pan hit me at the back of my head and I blacked out.
Rapunzel's POV
I squealed and hid behind a rolling mannequin. A man just climbed up my window!
"What do you think, Pascal?" I asked.
Pascal pointed at the painting of a man with fangs that mother drew and using my frying pan, I slightly pushed his lip up, just to show a couple of teeth. He doesn't appear to have fangs at all.
Pascal's eyes widened.
Suddenly, he seemed to be recovered already and he opened one little squinty eye at me. Panicking, I hit him hard with my frying pan again.
I chose to hide him in my closet. After several attempts, I finally got him inside.
"Okay, I have a person in my closet... I have a person in my closet!" I shrieked.
"Too weak to handle myself out there, huh, mother? Well, say that to my frying pan!" I swung the pan around and hit my head (thankfully not so hard, but it hurt). "Ow,"
That is the first chapter. I'm going to replace Flynn with Finn and Maximus with Jake so it all fits. Remember, the faster you review, the faster I update! ;)