ya...this is my first story so don't critic me too badly...and also...I was thinking this is kinda like a poem that doesn't rhyme cause I don't like rhyming things that much...hehe...
Glowing Efernal
I burn of darkness and loneliness…
Glowing flames enveloping me
Life and death
Empty
Despair, hate, anger, rage..
Dark and burning
Its burning me
Will the light rescue me?
Will they seek me out?
Like I'm important?
Someone…
Help me...
Before its too late…
is this bad? good? tell me! plz review!!!! much appreciated!! oh ya...tell me if you want me to describe another character...;;;;
thx from Chibi Hitsu!