Please review and comment for me. This is my first story and i would like to know if its worthwhile, if i should continue wasting my time. Just let me know if i can improve anything. I know some chapters get boring (rarely) but thats only because i'm on a slight daze. Reviewing takes only what, 3 minutes? Out of how many minutes you take to read the actual story? (Just saying it would be really nice if i recieved a couple comments from people i don't actually know)

Bella's POV

Jacob was sitting on the park bench, bent over.

"Jake, hey is something wrong?" I said walking closer. That's when he lifted his head, he looked up at me with brown eyes that I could now barley see. His face was covered in zits, pimples, rashes, blackheads and every face enemy you could think of.

"Jake… wha-wha… what happened?" I felt speechless but had so many questions.

"Umm…" I grasped for a question to pull out of my head

"How?" He tried to smile but winced at the pain of his face, I felt like laughing, but I guessed that would be rude.

"Well," he began "It started when I was picking flowers in a meadow…" I saw him look up at my disgusted wrinkled face, my eyebrows raised, eyes squinted, nose crinkled, lip curled.

"I was picking them for you," He continued,

"But I never knew I was allergic to daisies…" I was puzzled by the fact that he was picking flowers for me,

"Jake.. why were you-" I was cut off mid sentence,
"I was hoping maybe you'd give me a second chance! So I kept sniffing the flowers, making sure they were perfectly perfect, slapping them to my face, vigorously smelling them, to make sure they had the sweet scent for only the sweetest person…"

I relaxed my face and then realized he was sucking up and rolled my eyes. He could tell I was catching on,

"Your still dating that blood sucker?" He whined.

"Wow, obviously I missed something great," The blood sucker chimed in. Edward. My stomach turned upside down for a brief moment and then I felt his cool arm around my waste. Jacob and Edward are temporarily on amends, being on amends I want no fighting, not even a put down, so I gave Edward a "look." and then I saw Jake smirk behind his blistered face. God these men are hard to take care of. Little did I know Edward had mad a poem in is head;

Jacob Black

Stepped on a crack

broke his mothers back

I threw him in a sack

it was black, black, black

He was never found.

"Scrub that face" Edward held back a laugh.

"I can't scrub it or touch it for six weeks or it will spread." Jake sighed. I couldn't help it, I let out a laugh

"HAH!" I then realized I had laughed and buried my head into Edwards shoulder. Jake's head dropped between his knees, and Edward and I walked away with my head still jammed into his shoulder. In a way I feel bad Jake tries so hard to impress me sometimes, but he knows I'm true to Edward.

"Bye Jake…" My voice was muffled in Edwards shoulder. Edward then looked down at me when we were far enough away from Jake,

"So where to today?" he said with his melodious voice.

"Hmm.." I definitely had to think on that one. With Edward, you feel like there's nothing you can't do, but then again, with Charlie you feel like there's nothing you can do. Then again, I was on summer vacation and at legal age to be an adult.

"Well?" He said half impatiently, I never realized time passed so quickly while I was thinking, then again, Edward didn't always have the highest tolerance for my thinking.

"For right now let's just go back to my place." I sighed,

"I still must think about this great opportunity!" I smiled.

Back at my place I was laying on my bed upside down reading a teen magazine and Edward was listening to some classical music that he had bought, he sounded like this:

"…..wrong…wrong…wrong…wrong………WRONG…wrong" He really hated listening to immature music, so why was he listening to baby Mozart? I was reading those embarrassing stories and came across one, after finishing reading it I fell off my bed in laughter. Edward thought I had a heart attack or something and was by my side before I hit the floor,

"What is the matter?" He looked back at the CD player,

"Wrong!"

"I just read a really funny embarrassing story" I snorted,

"Well, I want to hear this story, this story that almost killed you!" I was still recovering from my laughing spell, sat up, composed my sell and began to read, still half snorting.

"Movie Mishap

My crush finally invited me to go to the movies with him. I had no clue it was a scary movie until we got there. I really had to use the bathroom and was about to get up when he put his arm around me – I wasn't about to budge! But then a monster appeared on the screen and it scared me so much that I accidentally peed all over myself. My crush didn't figure it out until the movie was over. He looked so disgusted!" I almost fell off the bed again. Edward just looked at me solemnly, that's happened to me before… I stared at him

"You peed on yourself in the movies?!"

"No, no, my date did. that was a long time ago, like my only date before you." I snickered,

"Oh my gosh! What did you do?" He rolled his eyes back in his head as if trying to think,

"Damn, you don't have to be so serious about it!" I laughed again,

"Well," He recalled,
"I believe I saw her, felt bad for her, and like… almost slammed my drink into her lap."

"Aww," I leaned back on the bed against him and traced his knuckles.

"You know," He began looking down at me,

"What would be nice, is if we got all the facial products possible and dropped them at Jacobs door."

"Hey," I whined,

"That's a put down, I want one nice thing about Jacob!" He rolled his eyes and pondered for 2 minutes,

"Umm…he's hit puberty." I could help but laugh,

"That'll have to do."

"Oh!" Edward claimed. I was startled,

"What?" he got up collected his things and got ready to leave,

"What, is Charlie home? It's okay to be here you know." he was at the door with his backpack,

"Um, no it's not that. I uh, I have to go." he shut the door and left me puzzled and confused on my bed. I read my magazine for about 2 more house 5 more times. Then Alice came in,

"Hey sweetie" She smiled,
"Heyy…" My voice was kind of hoarse from not using it for two hours. I sat up with bed head.

"Where'd Edward go?"

"I don't know, he seemed kind of weird earlier, he just got his stuff together and left." She looked out the window and looked relieved,

"Oh there he is," I jumped up from the bed to see his Volvo pulling into the driveway. He signaled for me to come out, like he wanted me to see something.

"Hey, where did you go earlier?"

"Oh, Carlisle had some business for me earlier I had forgotten about. Let's go out to eat, well…" I smiled and nodded, I knew what he meant. I got in the car and we kissed he pulled away and kind of looked disgusted,

"Bella, he grimaced, in need of a mint." I wasn't offended, this wasn't the first time I had been marked of my breathe,

"Check the glove box, I think Alice got mints for school or something." That's weird Edward never keeps anything in his glove compartment. I opened the box,

"Edward, I don't see anything in here except two tickets to Cruise tickets to… Alaska.. King and……Queen Sweets…