Author's note

Hey all, yesterday I was thinking of writing something new but couldn't decide what. I asked my friends what they thought. Superhypercarrot said that I should maybe do something with Peter/Tris. I tried and here you go, a oneshot Peter's perspective on Tris. Its not that great but ah well. Read and Review! I love feedback :P

Bye for now!

-Ninja Antelope


I don't know how she does it... She comes across as a small, quiet, anxious nobody from Abnegation, then next thing you know she's on the top of the rankings. How is that possible? I put my head in my hands, trying to make sense out of the mess of my thoughts. There is just something about her, she's different. Interesting. Makes you want to know more about her. I like it. I don't know how, but Tobias has this effect on her, makes her act differently. I envy him for that. But I can't like her, for my own good. If I get too distracted, I won't be able to concentrate in training, and then I'll be edged out of the rankings. No. That can't happen. But she's just so hard to ignore. I find myself pacing up and down the dorm thinking of what to do. Luckily nobody's around, they're all too busy celebrating the rankings of stage two. I have nothing to celebrate. I'm not first, I'm second. No one looks at second place. Its first that everyone wants. I have to do something... I couldn't do anything to her, I just couldn't. I'm forced back to reality by the sound of someone coming in. It's her. Tris Prior. First ranking. She's probably here to gloat. I'm not in the mood. She says something unexpected, her words of congratulations are barely audible as all I can hear is my heart beating. I manage to mutter a quiet "Thank you." before she goes to sit on her bed. I'd never have a chance with someone like her. Ever. She looks at me and I really hope she cannot see through my expression, she smiles. I wish I could know what she was thinking. I stare at the wall. Maybe one day, I think to myself.