Ok so this is my first Kingdom Hearts story. the other things i have put up were just scripts that iv made up. but this is the first story.
so go easy on me if there are some mistakes and what not. my spelling is horrible so i did my best to correct it. so please dont tell me that there are some spelling errors.
anywho. please reveiw and tell me what you think
im not sure at the moment how long its going to be (aka how many chapters) but i have a part 2 done but your going to have to reveiw to get it.
disclamer: i do not own kingdom hearts. if i did that would so kick some ass.
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so yah enjoy...
Tough Luck
By whys the rum gone. (aka me so dont steal)
Riku:
Chapter One Part One:
The day was long. I sat slumped down in my chair staring at my empty paper. The teacher dragging on and on in the same boring tone as always. I can't stand it. Every word he said put me more into a daze. I was slowly falling asleep.
My head hit the desk causing the entire class to look up from there work. The few who didn't look were the ones who were already asleep. I could feel the teacher staring angrily at me as he made his way through the desks till he was standing beside me book in hand. A second later and I felt pain in me head where the teacher had just hit me hard with the textbook. I shot up in my seat and rubbed my now very soar head feeling a bump beginning to form.
"Fucking teacher." I mumbled. The teacher looked back at me in a firing rage, face redder than a tomato, his hands gripping that same text book making his knuckles turn white.
"What did you just say?" He screamed.
"Sorry teacher." I said. I let out a small sigh and held my mouth shut stopping myself from saying anything more.
"That's what I thought you said." He yelled angrily. "Detention!"
Grate yet another detention this week. It wasn't my entire fault, if the teacher didn't have such a goddamn bad temper and such a boring class I would be happy and able to stay awake. But than again I think he just hates me. Not that I blame him I'm never nice to the man, but still its no reason to give me a detention once a day.
The class bell rang and I booked it out of there, walking quickly down the halls till I came to Sora's class. He always took so long to get his books into his beg that I was always able to get there before he left. I peaked into the room to see Sora swing his beg over his shoulders, he slim little girly shoulders. He looked up noticing my glance eyes meeting mine and I melted, not wanting to look away. He gave me a smile and my eyes made it down to his lips, his cherry pink lips that he sometimes put gloss that he stole from his friend on. I smiled getting more of an erg to pull him close and kiss him.
When he finally comes out of the class I did just that. The kiss was long and soft like one of those movie kisses without all the tongue. I loved the way he tasted; I couldn't describe how much I loved it.
The kiss was broken when I was punched hard on the arm. When I turned around I noticed it was my friend Tidus.
"Yo dude, why you all kissy in the hall? He said. He shoved his hands into his pockets causing his pants to fall even more down his ass.
"Tidus, pull up your pants your making a fool out of yourself." I said.
I felt a felt a little tug on my sleeve. I lightly grabbed his wrist and pulled him into a hug, wrapping my arms around his small waist.
"Riku I have to go to next class. Ill see you after." Sora said sounding sad. I gave him one last kiss before I let him go off to class.
"Dude you do know that every time you kiss him people stare and whisper." Tidus said. He lightly patted my shoulder.
"I know and I don't care." I said. I walked passed him and towards the cafeteria.
"That's a good way to live life." Tidus said. He shrugged his shoulders than fallowed closely behind me.
The cafeteria was full with people laughing and talking. As soon as I walked in the room seemed to quiet down for a minute as a few people stared oddly at me making a few comments. The cafeteria was hot and smelled like the daily lunch special, meat loaf. How people could eat the food I wasn't sure. The last time I had actually ordered something I found little white hairs in it since the lunch ladies don't ware hairnets.
I sat down at an empty table where Tidus sat across from me trying to make conversation but I was off in my own little world to pay any attention to what he was saying. I had other things on my mine, Sora.
A few ugly girls sat down at the other end of the table mumbling and laughing. All of them stared at me and I know what they were thinking. The ugliest of them all slid down close to me. I could smell her rancid breath from the meatloaf and whatever she had eaten. Her metal mouth smiled at me. I held my breath in disgust and looked away hoping she would get the hint and leave but I wasn't that lucky. She decided to speak breathing heavily on me so I slid over a bit till I was up against the wall. She just slid closer.
"Is it true that you're gay? My friend saw you kissing another boy yesterday." She said. Her face moved closer to mine and I began to feel more nauseous. I choked but my throw up, I couldn't take it anymore.
"Back up off me you smelly ugly girl. Your breath is worse than ass." I yelled. I could care less how she felt after that. She needed to know she was repulsive. I could see tears build up in her eyes. I could see Tidus holding back his laughter as best he could but it was no use he burst out laughing so that everyone around could hear.
"You girls get out of here." Tidus said becoming serious for a minute before laughing again.
The three girls got up and ran out one of which was crying. Tidus just continued to laugh uncontrollably.
"Riku I cant believe you said that. The whole school is going to think your heartless now." Tidus said through the laughter.
"I had to say something. I was about to barf right there and than which would have smelled better than her." I said. I leaned slightly back but not far enough to fall back on the bench. I closed my eyes and said. "Stupid girls." I let out a small sigh and reopened my eyes to find Tidus staring at me completely finished laughing.
"Riku don't let those girls get to you. There just jealous cause you got Sora and Sora got you. You two are the hottest guys in the whole school who wouldn't be jealous." Tidus announced, his voice becoming smaller as he came to the end of his sentence.
I looked up at him from the table and raised an eyebrow. "What do you mean by that. You don't happen to be jealous do you?" I asked.
Tidus said nothing he only searched for words that would make it seem as though he wasn't gay but nothing came.
"Are you gay?" I asked quickly hoping to get a straight answer.
To be continued…
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