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A Time for Trust
Chapter #1
Obi-Wan felt rather than saw the lightsaber barely miss his right ear as it rushed by searing hot. The battle had hardly stared yet he knew from his opponent's precise accuracy that it would be soon over.
Obi-Wan reached out to the force that connected him to all things alive and well and he felt the steady pulsing of the lightsaber griped in his sweaty palm. But even more interesting he felt the connection to his opponent not a normal connection of the force but he knew this person's rhythm and step he had memorized it. where from though, it wasn't Bant or Qui-Gon. Who then?
The boy still lost in his thought didn't notice the charging figure until it was too late, Obi-wan flung him out of the way as the sting came acing and true. He knew it would hurt sorely in a while but now he pushed that thought out of his head.
Obi-Wan listened to the beat of the force and slowly melted into the dance he might not know who this person was but knowing there timing could be all for the better.
He parried a vicious strike and came down on his opponent taking the offence. The sweat was starting to build around his forehead and in his eyes he stubbornly ignored it. He opponent miss stepped and Obi-Wan saw his chance and lunged but they were ready for him, and struck back Obi-Wan barely got his lightsaber around in time to block it. They had tricked him? He had to pay more attention if he had any intention of leaning anything here.
He tried to concentrate on the other's rhythm again, - a face shining with sweat Lightsaber held at a ready stance- suddenly glistened into his mind, Siri, It's Siri! Siri charged Obi' Wan thought fast, he stepped backwards and tripped over a block his lightsaber sliding a few meters away and shutting off. Obi-Wan silently cursed at himself why hadn't he seen the block there.
Siri was surprised to see her opponent trip and fall. Did Jedi Trip at all? She knew she didn't unless something was really bothering her.but Jedi where supposed to be beyond that!
He had made a mistake but so had she, she realised for she was to close to the other to stop in time. Two seconds after one fell the other tripped and twisted in mid air onto her back But unlike Obi-Wan, Siri held tight to her lightsaber.
Obi-Wan felt the sharp kick to his side and smiled, as he grimaced, Siri had the advantage he knew she was half on top of him and she still had her lightsaber.
Obi-Wan knew he wasn't in the best position to smile yet smile he did for he knew exactly what to do next. He knew Siri and he knew what she expected him to do: Scramble for his lightsaber while she easily won the match with her own weapon, but obi-Wan knew better.
The strike came as he knew it would straight down towards his neck, He quickly dodged under the hot laser and grabbed her hand with one hand and the hilt of her saber with the other. He twisted quickly and she let out a sharp gasp as she lost her grip on the weapon.
"Obi-Wan!" she hissed though her teeth.
"Didn't see that coming!" he smiled
Obi-wan grabbed the weapon and started to stand to get his balance. But she grabbed his tunic and through him off to the side. Then she quickly scrambled toward the other lightsaber, knowing that she only had a very slim chance of getting her own back from the boy. She grabbed the boy's saber and quickly activated it, to block a slash by him.
"Hey that's my'n," he whispered
"That's ok now were even" She brought down another attack, "Almost."
Obi-Wan instead of taking the defensive parried her Offensive with his own. She faked right, but went left. The lightsaber met air.
She had lost her connection with the force where did he go. How did it just disappear?
Obi-Wan ducked fast as she swung took a deep breath he just had enough time too see the surprised look on her face before his leg came in contact with hers and she was lying face up on the floor. He gently bent down and touched her with his lightsaber on the neck. "You thought you had me didn't you" he whispered deactivating and setting down her lightsaber before he got back up again.
"Very good! Yoda exclaimed, "see we here that we kneed not only strength and skill to win a battle," Siri got up, and the two children bowed to each other and to the adults.
Obi-Wan tuned away with Siri out of the arena.
"Obi-Wan," she said quietly as she came out of the change room, "Something happened out there just before you tripped me."
"Hey," Obi-Wan interrupted "I'll talk to you after but I want to get changed now so I can go back and see the next match K?" She nodded and he went to leave but tuned and called back "You really had me there though"
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If you liked it let me know R&R
or email me at: dreamberry86@hotmail.com
-DreamBerry
A Time for Trust
Chapter #1
Obi-Wan felt rather than saw the lightsaber barely miss his right ear as it rushed by searing hot. The battle had hardly stared yet he knew from his opponent's precise accuracy that it would be soon over.
Obi-Wan reached out to the force that connected him to all things alive and well and he felt the steady pulsing of the lightsaber griped in his sweaty palm. But even more interesting he felt the connection to his opponent not a normal connection of the force but he knew this person's rhythm and step he had memorized it. where from though, it wasn't Bant or Qui-Gon. Who then?
The boy still lost in his thought didn't notice the charging figure until it was too late, Obi-wan flung him out of the way as the sting came acing and true. He knew it would hurt sorely in a while but now he pushed that thought out of his head.
Obi-Wan listened to the beat of the force and slowly melted into the dance he might not know who this person was but knowing there timing could be all for the better.
He parried a vicious strike and came down on his opponent taking the offence. The sweat was starting to build around his forehead and in his eyes he stubbornly ignored it. He opponent miss stepped and Obi-Wan saw his chance and lunged but they were ready for him, and struck back Obi-Wan barely got his lightsaber around in time to block it. They had tricked him? He had to pay more attention if he had any intention of leaning anything here.
He tried to concentrate on the other's rhythm again, - a face shining with sweat Lightsaber held at a ready stance- suddenly glistened into his mind, Siri, It's Siri! Siri charged Obi' Wan thought fast, he stepped backwards and tripped over a block his lightsaber sliding a few meters away and shutting off. Obi-Wan silently cursed at himself why hadn't he seen the block there.
Siri was surprised to see her opponent trip and fall. Did Jedi Trip at all? She knew she didn't unless something was really bothering her.but Jedi where supposed to be beyond that!
He had made a mistake but so had she, she realised for she was to close to the other to stop in time. Two seconds after one fell the other tripped and twisted in mid air onto her back But unlike Obi-Wan, Siri held tight to her lightsaber.
Obi-Wan felt the sharp kick to his side and smiled, as he grimaced, Siri had the advantage he knew she was half on top of him and she still had her lightsaber.
Obi-Wan knew he wasn't in the best position to smile yet smile he did for he knew exactly what to do next. He knew Siri and he knew what she expected him to do: Scramble for his lightsaber while she easily won the match with her own weapon, but obi-Wan knew better.
The strike came as he knew it would straight down towards his neck, He quickly dodged under the hot laser and grabbed her hand with one hand and the hilt of her saber with the other. He twisted quickly and she let out a sharp gasp as she lost her grip on the weapon.
"Obi-Wan!" she hissed though her teeth.
"Didn't see that coming!" he smiled
Obi-wan grabbed the weapon and started to stand to get his balance. But she grabbed his tunic and through him off to the side. Then she quickly scrambled toward the other lightsaber, knowing that she only had a very slim chance of getting her own back from the boy. She grabbed the boy's saber and quickly activated it, to block a slash by him.
"Hey that's my'n," he whispered
"That's ok now were even" She brought down another attack, "Almost."
Obi-Wan instead of taking the defensive parried her Offensive with his own. She faked right, but went left. The lightsaber met air.
She had lost her connection with the force where did he go. How did it just disappear?
Obi-Wan ducked fast as she swung took a deep breath he just had enough time too see the surprised look on her face before his leg came in contact with hers and she was lying face up on the floor. He gently bent down and touched her with his lightsaber on the neck. "You thought you had me didn't you" he whispered deactivating and setting down her lightsaber before he got back up again.
"Very good! Yoda exclaimed, "see we here that we kneed not only strength and skill to win a battle," Siri got up, and the two children bowed to each other and to the adults.
Obi-Wan tuned away with Siri out of the arena.
"Obi-Wan," she said quietly as she came out of the change room, "Something happened out there just before you tripped me."
"Hey," Obi-Wan interrupted "I'll talk to you after but I want to get changed now so I can go back and see the next match K?" She nodded and he went to leave but tuned and called back "You really had me there though"
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If you liked it let me know R&R
or email me at: dreamberry86@hotmail.com
-DreamBerry