Sorry for the short chapter, just trying it out to see if people like, THEN comes the real excitement.
Reviews will keep it coming. I love to hear what you think should be changed in the story. That way, I can fix it!
Toad and Toadette
By: Dekuta
Ding Dong!
"Just a minute! I'm just putting the finishing touches on my hair!" Said Toadette, fixing her pink mushroom pigtails.
"Oh, hey Toad! What's up?" She asked, blushing as pink as her cap.
"Well, today my fireflower fell out of its pot. Mario and Luigi were able to extinguish it, but my house is under repair for a few days. I was wondering if I could crash here for a while?"
"Hee, S-s-sure!" she giggled, obviously in her own world with him. "I'm having a few of my girlfriends over. You can hang with us if you want."
"No, it's okay! I'll try to stay out of your way, so you can have fun!"
"Okay… Be sure to make yourself at ho-"
Ding Dong! DingDongDingDongDingDong!
"Oh I'm coming you impatient… Toadia!" said the now awakened Mushroomer.
"Hi! I love your new house in Toad Town! It's so pretty, cozy, and… pink."
It was true. With only 4 rooms: Upstairs, two middle floors, and a basement, it's still got a remarkable amount of pink.
"Who's the HUNK?!" asked Toadia, staring at Toad.
"That's my friend Toad!" said a clearly angry and jealous Toadette, while Toad just waved shyly.
Finally, everyone was here! There was Toadia, almost a twin of Toadette except yellow, not pink. There was Toadara, a toad with long lashes, and flowing blue hair coming from her blue cap with white spots. Bombette, who should not have to be introduced, and last, Toadi, the tomboy, red cap, pink spots, and short blonde hair coming out from the top. All, except Bombette, had the same reaction to toad, causing the same reaction from Toadette. They all had gotten sleeping bags that matched them and laid them down in Toadette's remarkably luxurious basement.
"Let's get ready to have some major fun!" screamed Toadette.
Upstairs, Toad was lying in Toadette's bed, dreaming of her.
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