This is my first story so please be kind, i know it sucks and i really arent very good at writing. But please read and review it and let me know what you think.
CLAIRE POV
It was getting dark outside and i was walking, from Myrnins lab, on the stony path to the glass house - home. I kept getting the feeling that i was being watched by something, the feeling made me shiver and i jogged ahead towards the front door. Frantically i shoved the key into the lock, unlocking the door, and stepped inside. "Hey!... Anyone?" I shouted feeling strangely cold.
After a few minutes deciding on what to do i went up the stairs, my bare feet not making any noise. I tiptoed towards shanes room, careful not to disturb anyone if they were sleeping, then opened the door to see if he was in. I gasped. He was laid in his bed, naked i guessed, kissing some bitch. I'd never seen the girl before; she had curly, blonde hair and her small hand, with red painted nails, tangled in his hair as they kissed. I was upset. Shocked. How could he do such a thing! I couldnt believe he would actually cheat on me. "What. The. Hell!" the words finally managed to escape my mouth. "Claire?...No this isnt what it looks like..."
"No? This is exactly what it looks like!" i shot back. I felt the tears sting in the back of my eyes and i ran out of the room and downstairs.
I know its short but I wanted to know what you think of it and if I should actually carry on. I promise to make the next chapter more interesting and better.