Hey guys this is my first story please tell me what you think.

Once upon a time there was a beautiful princess named Maddie. She was the fairest in all the land. Pfft... lets be serious now she's a total B-Word, at least in my opinion. Hi I'm Micah and this is my story of how I turned this witch with a B into a girl worth marrying.

I'm a professional edict teacher for children. One day a royal carriage came up to my house. A fancy-looking man came up to me and told me to pack my stuff; I've been recruited. I was told that I had one week to pack my stuff and find someone to replace me at the school.

A week later I had my stuff all packed and a replacement teacher found. I was sitting in my living room when I heard a girl yelling over the blare of the royal trumpets. I got my stuff and walked out the door. A man came and put my things into the carriage.

I walked around the carriage and saw the most beautiful girl I ever laid eyes on. I climbed into the carriage and introduced myself.

"Hi I'm Micah."

Silence

"Hi I'm Micah." I repeated.

"I heard you." she snapped

"Well the proper way to acknowledge that is to introduce yourself."

"FINE! I'm Maddie."

"Hello Maddie, I'm your new edict teacher."

"I didn't say you could call me that."

"Okay what may I call you?"

"You can call me Your Royal Highness."

"Perhaps something shorter?"

"FINE! Princess Maddie"

"Okay Princess Maddie lets get started."

We started with some thing simple; proper greeting. We studied for almost an hour when suddenly the carriage stopped. I got out and saw that we were at McDonald's. The guard walked in and ordered the Royal Buffet. We ate in silence and when we finished we reloaded the carriage. Before I got on I ask the nearest guard, "How much time will there be until we reach the castle?"

"Getting tired of her already?" the guard chuckled.

"I don't want to complain but she's so difficult."

"I feel ya man I used to be her personal slave."

"Sounds...fun."

"Yea it was"

I laughed

"About ½ an hour until we reach home"

"Okay thanks...um"

"Rachael, My name's Rachael."

"Mine's Micah"

"Pleasure to meet you Micah."

"The pleasure's all mine."

"I got to go see you around."

And with that she left. I sighed If only Princess Maddie was more like Rachael, I thought. Then I climbed into the carriage ready to start working again. The ride home was even worse. It had took all my patience not to scream at her and I thought I had a lot of patience. I work with seven year-old's after all. We're still working on proper speech when she starts flipping out on e for correcting her again.

"I need to take a break." I mutter. I don't wait for her to reply, I climb through the curtain separating us from the guards. I see and hear Rachael talking to some guy I don't know. He's about 6'9" and is built. He has shaggy black hair, dark eyes, and looks important. I hear them talking.

"So you met the new guy?" Mystery Man asks.

Should I continue? Let me know in the reviews!