Hey everyone, this is my first fan fic. Its not the best, but I think its good, read and tell me what you like/don't like about it, and what i can do to improve it. I'll post a new chapter when I get 7 good reviews. Thanks, enjoy!
Disclaimer: Suzann Collins owns some characters, I own a select few. i also own the plot. (though I wish I did own the books)
"Today is going to be a crapy day, even for my own standards" thought Gregor "I just hope my parents don't remember" Gregor didn't want to go to school, his friends might ask him why he looks so sad. He couldn't exactly tell his friends why, just imagine how that would go, "oh you want to know why im so sad guys? well two years ago I left the only place that made me happy, most of my friends were there, and my girl friend." yea that would work so well, because they would ask were and he would have to say the Underland. Gregor left all that behind two years ago, the underland, and all the people he had grown close to. The thing gregor missed the most was the 12- no 14 year old queen of Regelia, Luxa, he loved that name, L-u-x-a he said slowly feeling the word cross over his lips. Gregor felt bad, he didnt even fight that hard to stay. "stop beating your self up over it" gregor told himself "mom wouldn't have let me stayed anyway" there was a knock on his door and his parents entered.
"hey sweetie there is someone here to tal- OH! whats wrong!? are you sick?" Gregor did look a little sick, his face was contorted with pain. He tried to control his emotions. " yea mom I'm-" gregor voice cracked "yea im fine" Gregors mom didnt look satisfied with that answer. "could you guys get out so i can change? i need to get ready for school" asked Gregor.
"you won't be going to school for a long time" said a voice he couldnt clearly recognize the voice was veagly familiar and had an underlandish acient. when he saw the owner of the voice he nearly died(of hapiness ofcourse). gregor tumbled out of bed, ramed through his parents, and threw his arms around her. luxa hugged him back and almost broke his neck she was holding him so tight.
"Luxa!" gregor cried "I missed you so much"
"I thought you have forgotten me" whispered luxa with dread
"never, i could never forget you" gregor whispered back. Gregor closed the space between them and leaned his forehead against hers "because you're mine"
"i love you" luxa cried with relief. before Gregor could reply luxa jammed her mouth onto his. gregor's mom gave a little squeak of protest, but gregor didn't care. he could have stayed there all day kissing luxa but his mom had other ideas.
"ok, thats enough" my mom said patently. i just ignored her, kissing luxa harder. "I said enough" this time with more intensity. i just waved her away and replaced my hand on luxa's side. "thats it, ENOUGH!" she yelled at me, yanking us apart. after that was settled boots woke up giving my dad an excuse to leave the conversation.
"what do you mean gregor is not going to school? of course he is, because he isn't going back to the underland and you know that, so why are you here" asked gregor's mom as she swatted away luxa's hand from holding her son's.
"mom there must be another proph-" gregor started.
"No! no no no! i told you! you will not go!" shrieked Gregor's mom.
"yes he must go! i am the queen and i say he shall go!" luxa stated.
"No he shan't, for you are not my nor gregors queen, and does this 'prophecy' say he has to go?"
"of course it does, im the warrior" scoffed gregor, but the look on luxa's face told him other wise. "right?" he asked uncertainly.
"Ha! he dosnt have to go then!" smirked gregors mom in triumph. ignoring his mom Gregor asked luxa if she had the prophesy.
"ok but i do not think you will like it" luxe mumbled, but she said it any way.
Six shall go west and free the man who has been burned
three shall find what was stolen and see it safely returned
two shall be marked by the cutters cusre
one shall be brought back in a hearse
the cutters curse must one withstand
or one shall die by their partners hand
the bane of Regalia shows the trail
Over's under's combined prevail.
Luxa was right, gregor didnt like it, even though he didnt even know what the prophecy was saying. "wait" gregor said, thinking about the last line "Over's under's combined prevail... mom! i must be an over so the prophecy does say i can go!" gregor said excitedly.
"NO! those creepy underlanders can find them selves another overlander" luxa cringed when she said creepy. gregor felt like he needed to protect his girlfriend so he stepped in front of her.
"how dare you!" shouted luxa behind gregor "ive been nothing but nice to your family and this is how you treat me?!" Gregor just retreated to the coner of the bedroom, which was like two feet away because his room was so small, trying not to get in the way. gregors mom fumed and usherd luxa out of the room
"well im sorry your highness, let me escort you to the door!" gregors mom grunted angrily, but he saw somthing else in her eyes. Guilt, luxas words hit her hard. gregor was about to protest that he couldn't loose luxa agin but he caught luxa was gesturing her head towards something. confused , gregor stared at her hoping she got the message. "dresser" she mouthed. Ohh! dresser, there was something on his dresser luxa wanted him to see...maybe. gregor turnerned back to is dresser and found a picture the one of him and luxa dancing. confused and angry Gregor hit his dresser and plunked onto his bed watching the picture float down to his feet. Gregor gave an audible gasp as the picture landed upside down, there were words written on the back. he picked up the picture and began reading.
Thats the first chapter, how do you like it? tell me in a review, and be honest. thanks! and im home schooled so i can update faster then normal. don't forget to review.