Hello honorable readers :D
This is my first English fanfiction, so maybe there are some grammar errors.
Comments and critiques are very welcome in this fic.
Now, without further ado, let's begin the story.
Warning: NaruHina, godlike Naruto, all nine bijuu stuck inside Naruto's body, time-travel, maybe some Sasuke and Sakura bashing.
Disclaimer: I don't, and will NEVER own Naruto. It's just too sad...
Normal Speaking
Inside mind speaking/flashback
Bijuu/summon speaking
Name of jutsus
Chapter 1: Time Reversal
This is not supposed to happen.
The Juubi was already unleashed. Despite all of the shinobi efforts, they've lost. Greatly.
And here Naruto was, standing on top of dead bodies, while facing Uchiha Madara, his greatest enemy, after been fighting him for three years.
All of his friends death were imprinted very well in his memory. He remembered when Sakura tried to fight one of Juubi's clone, but ends up killed. When Sasuke helps him to fight Madara's Susano'o, but he was pierced by the Susano'o's blade. And all of his friend's horrible death.
But the most hurting one was a certain Hyuuga girl's death. He remembered very well when she sacrificed herself to protect him from one of Juubi's attack. And he also remembered her last words before she died.
"Because, I love you, N-Naruto-kun..."
That was the second time she ever said that to him. Those sentence finally opened his eyes, that a shy girl named Hinata Hyuuga trully loved him. It's not just a childish crush like his crush with Sakura, but a full-blown love.
"Give up, Naruto, it's no use. Your friends all dead."
Those words made Naruto focused again at his enemy. Madara stood arrogantly, his arms folded in front of his chest, with Obito Uchiha stood beside him. Naruto glared at them sharply.
"Don't listen to him, Naruto. Keep fighting. Don't waste your friends effort ," Kurama, the Nine-Tailed Fox suddenly spoke.
"Why it become like this? It's not supposed to be like this! I guess if we give up, these kind of things won't happen."
Kurama and the other bijuus –that surprisingly got stuck in Naruto's seal too- just stood in silence after hearing Naruto's last word.
"Actually I've got one solution," all head now turned towards Kokuo, the Five-Tailed, "did you all still remember the last jutsu that the old man taught to us?"
"Yeah," Son Goku –Four-Tailed- said, "the jutsu that could turn back the time right? Ninpou: Time Reversal."
"Time reversal?" Naruto asked.
"Yes. A jutsu that requires a really big chakra amount. It is considered as S-rank kinjutsu, because one mistake, and you'll be trapped in the time dimension forever," Kurama explained.
"Should we do it then? Isn't there any other choice?" asked Naruto.
"No, this is the best way to start this over. With that jutsu, you'll be able to save your friends and stop that Madara," Shukaku said.
"That's right Naruto! Let's do this!" Chomei chirped in cheerily.
Naruto just stood there, pondering his friends offer.
"If this is the only way to save all of them... then let's do it."
In the real world, Naruto's arms raised slightly, causing Madara to raise one of his eyebrow. Naruto's hand start to go into a numerous handseals.
"Looks like you give me no choice," Madara said emotionlessly as Juubi's mouth start to open and gather the energy to create bijuudama.
But before the ten-tailed monster managed to complete the bijuudama, a blinding light suddenly covered the entire place.
"Ninpou: Time Reversal!"
After the light dissappear, Madara and Obito quickly refocused to Naruto, only to find that the blonde hero was gone.
Naruto groggily opened his cerulean eyes. The last thing he remembered after he complete the technique was an unbearable pain over his body. It's just being like ripped apart bit by bit.
"What the hell? Where am I?"
Closing his eyes again, he tried to access his mindscape.
Naruto's Mindscape
Naruto slowly opened his eyes. In front of him, stood all of the nine bijuus.
"How are you feeling Naruto?" Kurama asked.
"I'm okay, but my head is aching a little," Naruto replied, while messaging his head, "so... did it work?"
"Yes. We've been transported back when you're still twelve years old," said Matatabi.
"Thank God for that," Naruto said relievely.
"So what should we do now? Should I tell Hiruzen-jiji?"
"Not now, I think. He'll probably didn't trust you. It's best if you keep this secret for a while," Son Goku said.
"At least you can meet that Hyuuga girl this time now, right Naruto?" Isobu said mischivieously, while the other bijuu snickered.
"Wha- what the hell are you thinking about! I can't just meet her and talk to her like nothing happened! She's still a timid, shy girl in this timeline you know! She'll faint if I suddenly go all nice to her," Naruto said with his cheek red because of embarrasment.
"By the way, you said that we've been transported back when I'm still twelve years old. That means..."
"It's the graduation exam day," Matatabi said.
"If I remembered well, this is the day when that bastard Mizuki told you about me trapped in your gut," Kurama scoffed at this, "really, he even said that YOU ARE the Kyuubi no Kitsune. To think that I was compared by you, puny mortal, really made me laugh! There's no way you can rival me, the strongest bijuu in the world!"
Kurama poofed his chest arrogantly, while the others sweatdropped, and Shukaku having a tick mark on his forehead.
"As arrogant as ever eh, rabbit ears? (A/N: sorry Kurama-san, no offense here *chuckled*)" said Shukaku.
Kurama twitched when he hear the nickname.
"I'm just stating a fact here. Is it bothering you, sandman?" Kurama countered.
Shukaku's vein popped on his forehead.
"You wanna try over-grown furball?!"
"Bring it on, Loser!"
Their little skirmish was interrupted when two blue tails slapped their head. Kurama and Shukaku's face immediately dig into the ground. Hard.
"WOULD YOU TWO SHUT THE FUCK UP?!" Matatabi roared angrily, while the other bijuu and Naruto backing up slowly, "just shut your mouth when we're trying to discuss something important here!"
"Yes ma'am," both bijuu said defeatly. They got up and rubbing their head while glaring each other.
"Well then... I have to go get dressed now. I can't be late for the graduation exam, can't I?" Naruto said awkwardly.
"Of course! Show them what you've got, Naruto-kun!" Chomei said cheerily.
"Sorry, Chomei-chan, but I think I'll hide my true strength for now. I have to capture that traitorous bastard right?" he said .
"And besides, don't you think an academy-student who knows Hiraishin and Rasengan is kinda... out of place?" he added sheepishly while scratching his cheek.
"Aww... but I really want to see the pink banshee and that emo Uchiha's face when you show them your awesome technique..." Chomei pouted.
"Maybe next time Chomei-chan," Naruto smiled.
"Okay... I'm out then," Naruto said before his body vanished.
Real World
Naruto opened his eyes, and quickly prepared himself. After locking his old apartment door, he then goes to academy via shunshin.
Naruto arrived on top of the academy's roof, and proceed himself to his classroom.
When he opened the door, his heart nearly stopped. He sees all of them, alive and well... still annoying as ever.
Shikamaru was sleeping peacefully, not even bothered by the noises in the classroom. Heh. Typical of the Nara.
Chouji sat besides Shikamaru, still eating his potato chips.
Shino is as stoic as always.
Kiba still considered himself as an 'alpha' in the class.
Ino and Sakura are still annoying fangirls. Seeing them and the other female classmate fawning over the almighty Uchiha Sasuke made Naruto frowned. How come he could have a crush with this bubblegum-haired girl back then?
The last person that Naruto sees almost made Naruto cried in happiness. At the corner, there's Hyuuga Hinata, the one that loved Naruto dearly, and vice versa now. She is still like the same Hyuuga girl Naruto knows in the other timeline. Shy and timid girl, and often seen twirling her fingers when she felt anxious. At first, he thought that kind of attitude is somehat weird, but... he found out that she looks adorable that way.
"Aww... did someone just said 'she looks adorable'?" Matatabi teased while the other bijuu chuckled and Chomei giggled.
"Shut up, Matatabi," Naruto screamed mentally while in the real world, his face is as red as tomato.
The bijuus laughed in his mindscape.
Naruto decides to make his presence known, and putting on his idiotic mask, while shouting, "good morning guys!"
All of his classmates turned their heads to look at him. Some with smile –in this case Choji and Kiba, others with an annoyed look, and a shy look from certain Hyuuga girl, while mumbling something sounded like 'hello'.
"You don't have to shout, Naruto-baka!" Sakura screeched from her seat.
Actually, Naruto will ignore her and made his way to Hinata, but he remembered that he still a loud, idiot dead-last, and still had a crush with that banshee.
"Sorry, Sakura-chan. Hey, can I sit next to you?" Naruto grinned sheepishly and offered her his best 'puppy-dog eyes', while he shivered mentally, saying 'please don't accept it, don't accept it, don't accept it!'.
"Hell no! This seat is for Sasuke-kun. Right Sasuke-kun?" Sakura gagged in disgust at him while blinked at 'her' Sasuke-kun, which caused the other fangirls twitched.
Naruto's face dropped, but in his mind, he mentally sighed in relieve.
"Well, nevermind, I'll sit next to Hinata!" Naruto said back to his usual cheery mood. The Hyuuga girl just 'eep' softly hearing his last words.
Naruto made his way to Hinata and sat next to her.
"Mornin' Hinata," he said softly to Hinata, keeping his urge to hug the Hyuuga heiress and said 'I love you'.
"M-Morning Naruto-kun..." Hinata replied while twirling her fingers.
Hearing her voice again made Naruto's heart melt. He really wanted to hear that angelic voice again after her death, and here he is, sitting next to her just like nothing happened.
"Don't worry Naruto. This time, we'll make sure that Madara didn't kill your friends again," Kurama said while the other bijuus nodded their heads approvingly.
"Thanks, Kurama," Naruto said while smiling at his friends mentally.
"Are you ready for the exam today?" Naruto asked.
"O-of course. I-I'll do my best, N-Naruto-kun," she said shyly.
"I've no doubt you'll pass the test, Hinata-chan," Naruto said, his eyes look at Hinata warmly.
Hinata was mesmerized with Naruto's gaze. Her vision suddenly darkened as she started to lose conciousness.
But before she fainted, the classroom door suddenly opened.
"Morning class," said Iruka and the class replied the same.
Naruto smiled sadly at his teacher. His death was also horrible. He was killed by one of Zetsu's clone in a fight. Naruto still remembered when Zetsu's hand pierced through Iruka's body. Despite Naruto's screams and pleads to him to hang on, he still can't make it. He's already dead when the medics rushed to the battlefield.
Well, no one's death is good actually.
"Alright guys, today is the day. You will have the graduation exam in order to become a genin. There will be written test, shuriken test, sparring test, and finally, jutsu test," Iruka explained. Naruto at this time didn't pay any attention to his words.
"My partner here, Mizuki, will spread the exam paper now. You have one hour to finished this exam," Iruka added. Mizuki got up and start to give the students the exam paper.
When he got to Naruto, Naruto saw a small wicked smile from him. Naruto's anger quickly rised.
"Calm down Naruto, you can beat him as much as you want later," Shukaku said, calming him down.
"Fine," grumbled Naruto mentally and started to fill his exam paper.
After one hour, Iruka told the students that the time has finished, and Mizuki collected the papers.
After that, they go outside to a small training field.
"Alright class, you have 10 shurikens and 10 kunais, your goal is to stick them to the target as accurate as possible. Let's start from..."
Naruto watched as his friends one by one start to throw the kunai and shuriken.
Chouji got 6 shurikens and 7 kunais, not bad.
Shikamaru got 5 shurikens and 5 kunais. Naruto knew that he could do it better, but maybe he thinks that it's too troublesome. Lazy-ass.
Sakura and Ino got 8 shurikens and 6 kunais, not bad from the fangirls either.
Shino got 7 shurikens and 7 kunais.
Kiba got 4 shurikens and 5 kunais. He left the training ground, angry to himself.
Iruka called Hinata and the shy girl walked in. Naruto look at his love intently. He's dying to see Hinata throw the weapons.
Hinata start throwing, and she got 9 shurikens and 8 kunais. That's wonderful, if Naruto should say.
Naruto smiled to her as she got back to her place. Then Iruka called Uchiha Sasuke.
The fangirls start to cheer wildly.
"Go, Sasuke-kun!"
"I know you can do it!"
"Show them what you've got Sasuke-kun!"
Naruto rolled his eyes. Even he's still questioning how come can these useless fangirls graduate? Naruto glad that at least, Sakura and Ino had become a capable kunoichi after his three-years training trip with Jiraiya.
Jiraiya... Naruto sadly remembered about his teacher and godfather. He really missed him... The last time he saw Jiraiya was before he went to Amegakure, and met his end there.
The cheer from the fangirls pulled Naruto back to reality. Sasuke got 10 shurikens and 9 kunais, all hit at the center of the target. He just smugly smirked at his work.
Typical of the Uchiha, Naruto thought.
"I don't like the Uchiha," Saiken said from the back of his mindscape, "too power-hungry and arrogant. Just because they are the descendant from Father made them think they're a god."
"Rip the sharingan from their eyes, and they'll be nothing but a mere shinobi," Gyuki said.
"I agree with you guys," Naruto said mentally.
"Uzumaki Naruto," Iruka called. Naruto got up and made his way to the training ground.
Naruto then picked up the weapons, and while placing the idiotic smile mask, throwed the weapons.
He just got one shuriken and three kunais stuck on the target. The other students laughed wildly. But in reality, he purposely missed the target. He could easily stuck all of them on the center of the target, but he choose to keep it now. He still have a mission to do, capturing the traitor.
"Ehehe... sorry Iruka-sensei, let me try it once more..." Naruto said grinning.
Iruka just shook his head at Naruto and announced that the exam is over.
The exam continued to sparring test, Naruto been paired with Sasuke. Of course Naruto let Sasuke beat him, earning a loud cheer from the fangirls.
"Seriously, can't they keep it down?" Naruto grumbled mentally while nursing his ears. He was sure that the fangirl's voice, especially Sakura and Ino could make his ear bleed.
"Fangirls," Matatabi stated coldly, "the useless part of kunoichi. I miss the day when all of the kunoichis were interested in jutsu than a good-looking guy. Like Yugito-chan," Matatabi smiled sadly, remembering her days as Yugito's partner. The Kumo jinchuriki's life was cut short when the immortal duo, Kakuzu and Hidan defeated Yugito and extracted the nekomata from her body.
"At least you have a capable, strong shinobi and the hero of the leaf as your container now, Matatabi," Kokuo said smiling at Naruto when the others do the same.
"I'm not that strong, really," Naruto said sheepishly.
"Of course you are, Naruto-kun! You kick Pein's ass back when he invaded Konoha. And he's got the Rinnegan you know!" Chomei said.
"Well, that's because he is an arrogant bastard that thinks he's a god or something, until I knock some sense to Nagato," Naruto said, "arrogance is what that leads you to your greatest downfall you know."
"Wise words that comes from a knucklehead ninja," Gyuki said and the other bijuu chuckled.
"Hey, I'm not that dumb!" Naruto protested.
"Now, it's time for jutsu test. I will call you one by one, please proceed to the examination room," Iruka said, "starting from..."
Naruto jut waited patiently, seeing his friends one by one got out from the room with their headband tied on their forehead proudly.
"Uzumaki Naruto," Iruka called and Naruto got up.
He shut the door behind him and turn to face Iruka and Mizuki.
"Alright Naruto, you have to make bunshins. What I mean bunshins is a SOLID bunshins," Iruka stressed at 'solid' word. Naruto just grinned.
He formed a handseal and shout "Bunshin no Jutsu!"
There was a poof, and after the smoke dissipated, stood Naruto and his bunshin. But the bunshin's condition looks... awful. His pupils were white, and any idiots knew that this bunshin were not capable for fighting.
Iruka's eyes twitched, and Naruto's face showed somewhat horror face.
"FAILED!" Iruka shouted, and Naruto face-vaulted.
"Iruka," Mizuki started to talk, "let Naruto graduate. He manage to make a bunshin. Let him pass."
"No," Iruka said sternly, "all students make at least two HEALTHY-looking bunshin. I can't let him pass."
Naruto sat on the swing, faking a sad mood. He just stare silently at the crowd of happy students and their parents.
"Well done!"
"You've finally become a ninja!"
"I'll cook your favorite dish tonight!"
Naruto just stare at them, smiling sadly. He remembered when his father, the Yondaime, appeared in his mindscape, when he almost rip the seal from Kurama's cage. He remembered when his mother Kushina, help him to fight against Kurama in order to merge with him.
He then looked up at the Hokage mountain, especially at Yondaime's face.
He then got up from the swing and exited the academy. Along his way, many people shot him a disgusted look, some even scowled at him.
"Bastards!" Chomei growled angrily, "they're such an idiot! Naruto-kun save your ass that night! Ungrateful bastards!"
"Chill out, Chomei-chan, their anger and sorrow for losing the people their love clouded their judgement," Naruto said wisely.
"You sounded like an old man now, Naruto," Kurama snorted.
"Hey!"
The sound of footsteps made his mind back to reality. He saw Mizuki approaching him. Great, it's the time.
"Naruto," Mizuki said, "I'm so sorry that you didn't pass."
"Why the hell didn't Iruka-sensei passed me? At least I managed to make a bunshin right? It's not fair!" Naruto said upset.
Mizuki just stood there quietly. Then he smiled.
"Actually I've got one solution for you, Naruto," Naruto's head perked up at this, "you have to steal the Forbidden Scroll at the Hokage's office without being caught. Bring it to me in the forest. Once you accomplished this mission, you'll graduate."
Perfect!
"Alright, Mizuki-sensei, I got it! I'll be back soon!" Naruto shouted happily while making his way towards the Hokage's office.
Mizuki just smiled evilly and chuckled.
"Now onto the next part of the plan..."
TBC
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If this fic get well responses, I'll updated another chapter in one or two weeks. I still have another work to do you know.
Alrighty then, see you later in next chapter! Bye bye~
Sayonara,
uzumakiheiress
10/10/2014
NOTE : Happy b'day Naruto-kun, wish you all the best! :D