An: Hey guys. This note will be short because I hate these and I''m assuming so do you. This is only my second fanfiction, but I want any review. Preferably advice and constructive criticsm. So please sit back and let Percy (Order/Chaos' father. Helix) do the disclaimer:
Percy: Fantard does not own me and co. wish he did though.
Me: Awwwww. So cheesy. Noogie!
Percy: NOOOOOOO-ACK!
Me: Enjoy!
Proloque
All was quiet in the mortal world. All was calm serene and peaceful. The same could not be said for the god' home in Olympus over the Empire State Building. Yeah, you heard me. I said Empire State Building. (AN: from here on if I have to say Empire state building I'm going to say ESB) 600th. Ok now pick up your jaw you'll catch flies. So as I was saying, on Olympus, the gods were freaking out. The Olympians and minor gods had sensed a large power level far out in the middle of Manhattan. The gods felt a power so vast and immense they immediately sent a message to the one person that could possibly help them in their hour of need. Lord Chaos, Master of the Void, Creator and Destroyer of everything, father of the Primordials, and Creator of the Ancient Laws that guided the immortals. Now all they had to do was wait and hope that he showed up and maybe with the primordials and a small army. Hopefully. Lord Chaos was not one to really help people. (AN: In my story Chaos is gonna be a jack-ass and idiot. He'll also be an idiot. He'll still be laid back though. He'll treat mortals like shit also. Demigods a little better and immortals the best. The Primordials will be nice.)He was better known to be a guiding force watching over the immortals. Or maybe a jack-ass watching with popcorn in the backround. Take your pick. Anyways, the gods were sitting in the winter solstice meeting planning on how to find, and in Zeus' idea of hope, hopefully make him fade. Well, as speaking, a dark portal of...well darkness opened up. Out of it stepped a magnificent specimen stepped out. He was amazing looking. His suit was pure darkness with stars and galaxies forming and blowing up in it. Suddenly, Zeus screamed out, real high and squeky having sensed this man's power, "WHO DARES ENTER OLYMPUS WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!" "I'm pretty sure I, Lord Chaos, can do whatever the fuck I want Zeus." Saying Zeus like it was the plaque. Suddenly, more portals opened up, and out stepped the Primordials. "Now your all wondering why I came here to help you when usually I let you dysfunctionaly solve your own problems. Well mostly, because if it had been just you Olympians sensing this power, I would have stayed back, but, I also sensed it all the way in the void, and I sensed it in full force, while you only sensed 1% of it. So yeah" At these word, the Olympians erupted into chaos (AN: hah pun) until the Primordials yelled, "SILENCE!" and they...well silenced. Then Chaos spoke, "Now I was wondering if Athena came over here with her brilliant mind, and give us a battle plan while I go scout the general area that the power was in." Then Chaos vanished. As he left, the Olympians, and much more benevolent (AN: Nice) Primordials, started strategizing. After about an hour, Chaos returned with a stricken face. "I couldn't get passed the barrier held up. It appears, YOU felt .00000000001% while, I experienced 1% percent." At this, all the females who never fought, except against Typhon, fainted, and also Ares, except he did it out of excitment. Then Olympus erupted. Until finally bellowed with his voice echoing, "SILENCE OLYMPIANS!" and they, again, silenced. "Now let us prepare. For now, I and the Primordials, will retreat to the Void and train. I hope, for this planet and your sake you will too." As Chaos and the Primordials prepared to leave, a note flashed in. As soon as it did, Chaos, and the Primordials stopped leaving and Chaos said, "Artemis, read the note." Artemis picked it up and read, "Dearest Olympians, Primordials, and CHAOS, I have wondered how long it would take for Chaos to come and help. Also, Chaos, your an idiot. I would never EVER, be able to be kept away from my family. Especially my wife. You know who they are. That's why you whiped their memories, and put them on the Council. For now, I won't name any names, but I hope they and you know, I will make YOU fade Chaos, but as for the Olympians, I'll let them be, unless they attempt to help you. Then only the mortals, my army, and family, will escape, and I will retake my throne SON. Now beware. Also, as a demonstration...FEEL MY POWER AND TREMBLE!" At these words, a massive amount of power exuded into the throne room, causing Chaos, and the Primordials, power to pale in comparison. Strangely, a couple of Olympians, and 1 primordial felt happy. These immortals were, Artemis, Ares, Hepheastus, Apollo, and Gaea, felt joyous. Then it left, and Ares spoke saying something that put it into perspective because he said it, "We're screwed. AWESOME!"