(i now it is a little short)
but i hope you stil injoy! (comment please.)
chapter:1
nooo jaaakkk! daxter screamt jak thought daxter was also capture wen he felt hem fal of his shoulder.
he was taken by suprise he cant see wen sombody blindfolded hem and his hands where in chains by the feeling of it,
two men took hem by his shoulders and throws him in a flying tanker next to sombody else and toke of,
without his friend dax.
jak (wisper): daxter he dax ...
thorn: i dont thing dat orange rat is here if he was here he was screaming or ears of.
jak: thorn is dat you?
thorn: yeah its me,
if i find out who is behand this he wil wish he was never born!
kira: ooohhh my head.
jak: kira wat are you doing here!
thorn: who is also here?
ashlien: i did not choice to be here.
men can hear she was really pist of.
kira: me and ashlien was shopping than i felt a needle poked in my arm and dan i black out.
there was a silents and the were thinking the same thing until thorn was brave enough to ask.
thorn: ashlien y-you where shopping?
ashlien: dat is none of your business!
jak: hey guy's we need to get out of here but i am in chains can sombody als move.
there was a silens.
jak: your all in chains arend ya.
there was a mumble of yes we are filling the air.
jak (sight): dan we hef no choice dan to wait for daxter.
there was once more a mumble of complaints from ashlien and thorn.
while jak wish for dat it wil not take so long as last time.
...
i had really fun riding this one.
i hope you injoy it to.
ow there wil be more chapter but dan i little bit differend dan this one.
she had some complaints about it.
(comment please):)