Hi! I had to feel bad for Lightning, didn't even get a second chance.

:(

The mare crept along the road's side, head drooping. She had lost everything, ever since that badge had been ripped off her Wonderbolt training outfit. Leaving the academy because you put other ponies in danger costs a fine of 2000 bits. She had to sell the mobile home she was living in to get out without going to prison. The leftover bits, which was about 1,243 bits had been used to buy a tent and cans of food. Lightning Dust lay out in the rain, lost in memories.

Knock, knock, knock.

"What do you want! If your that one marescout, I don't want any cookies!" Shouted a voice from inside.

"Uh... Mom? It's me. Lightning Dust,"

"Oh. Come in I guess," she said coldly.

Lightning walked in, and on the couch sat an older mare, but not too much older. About 30, Cheerilee's age. She had a tough look to her, very muscular. She was a pale yellow, and had a dark brown mane wrapped in a bun. But the most distinctive feature of her was a scar on her right cheek from all those years of being in the police. She was chief, as her cutie mark showed.

"Well Lightning! Somepony is home early," she said glaring at Lightning Dust, "Four days early, to be exact,"

"Yeah... uhh..."

"You failed didn't you?" She said, green eyes blazing with rage.

"Well, no. You see... there was an incident... in the training section,"

Her mother raised her eyebrow.

"And... it was caused by... me,"

She groaned in annoyance.

"Lightning Dust, can you ever do anything right? Tell me now. Why are you here?"

"I had to sell my home to pay the fine. It would be nice if... I could stay here, till I get back on my hooves," She finally said.

"No, you pitiful little creature! I had one last hope that my daughter would not be a failure, and that was crushed! I hope you never get back on your hooves you klutz! Now leave my doorstep, and never return!" Yelled her mother.

"B- But Gun Runner! Please!"

"GET OUT!" Yelled Gun Runner. She grabbed a club and hit Lightning on the face, causing pain everywhere. Almost instantly, it started to swell. Gun grabbed her by her wing, and threw her out the door, face planting her into the curb in front of her.

Slam.

That was three days ago. She now wear a big, black eye, as well as multiple facial bruises. But her heart was damaged the most. She had nothing going for her.

The rain started to fade, and the sunshine started to show. She looked up, and almost yelled in displeasure.

Rainbow Dash...

She ducked under her leaf covered tent at the outskirts of Ponyville. In the patch of the Everfree Forest by The Wonderbolt academy. She watched her rival order around the others, telling them where to attack the clouds.

That should be me! She thought.

What went wrong?

I need 2 more OC's! I already have 2. Send em' to me.

They need to have at least 3 character flaws, at least 3 different character positives. I also need a good body description (including hair style) I would live if you could send a link to a pic, I would love that. But if not, I won't mind. And personality traits like he/she likes to do, eat, ecx. No Alicorns! If you dont meet the requirements above, I will not use your character! So ttfn! (Ta Ta for now)