[Third person]
[15 minutes to 4pm]
Today wasn't a grand day in Elemore because a storm was upon the creatures living and or staying in it.

''Well what now that we now finish highschool in an early age''15 year old Lexy asked her siblings

''Lets relax for the next 6 months then we will look for a university were we could study for our future jobs''said anais

''but for now,were trapped inside only to eat dad's food scraps because he used the food money for 39 ultra buckets of fried chicken,what an ass''said Gumball

''Gumball,Darwin,Lexy and Anais report to the dinner table ''said their mother alerady secertly taking out food while richard was sleeping soundly like a baby

the kids walked in the kitchen to see their favorite food on the table warm and moist and to touch till richard jump from nowhere,trying to take the food for himself but Nicole tackled him to the ground and hit is neck with lots of force instantly knocking him out cold.''what the hell''all the kids said looking at their father's unconsous body.''Well kids if your father over do it,I'll knock him out cold''Nicole said panting for air''well we are gonna take our meals and watch spongebob ''the 4 kids said till there were stopped by their mother.''Kids me, your father, penny's and carrie's parents are going on a vacation to the Bahamas for 6 months and knowing that Gumball and Lexy are the same age which is 16,you are in charge for the months we are gone''Nicole told .Gumball's eyes lit up like a light bulb but before a thank you was given, Nicole gave conditions to apply and those were

''dont wonder in the streets after dark''

''no fighting or cursing''

''dont touch or break anything that belongs to us''

''no huge birthday must be at least 20-25 friends''

''no smoking or drinking''

''make sure that the garden in the back is in are allowed to pick the ripen fruits and greens''

''dont talk to strangers''

''no playing with dangerous includes claws''

''no moonshing''A/N its a secrect business making alchol and its illegal

''no scamming''

''and DO NOT do anything over the belt while your girlfriends are staying here''

''So dont do that stuff...wait our girlfrends are staying with us''Gumball and Darwin said beyond happy.

''Yeah,and dont over do it''Nicole said strictly

''well we are going to prepare for their arrival''the duo said while putting down their lunches and running up the stairs to fix up the place.

Gumball's P.O.V

''Well our girlfriends are staying here...YES.I had hoped that my mom will say that ''I said to Darwin

Darwin responed as his happy,go lucky personality''well it is fun that me and carrie will be together for 6 like a vacation but without parents''

''yeah but i'll be watching you and do you see the blue and orange blankets anywhere''I asked

''wait,you are saying that you dont trust me''Darwin said angered

''no,no I'm not saying that''I said defensive

''yeah you are saying that''Darwin said angered once more

''well,I mean it but you and Carrie nearly 'did it' once and I am not gonna take that risk''I said responsibly

''that was one time''he said whining

''well I am not gonna take that risk, you're 13 1/2 years old and she 13 years old''I said again responisbly

''fine,you can watch us oh and the blankets are where the silks are''Darwin said defeated

''thanks bro''I said back to my regular self.

back to third person

as Gumball and Darwin were getting their king sized beds for their girlfriends arrival ready,lexy was playing on her pink laptop playing that game like if her life depended on it.
''Yes,I am going to eat doge,I am going to eat him...yes I am in first place''Lexy yelled while eating her lunch with such vigor.''Oh come on Lexy,stop yelling'' a nais yelled.''sorry Anais'' Lexy said with a regretful voice and then she screamed again ''AH someone ate me''.''OH COME ON LEXY''Anais screamed and ran to her and Lexy's room and locked it''very sorry this time'' Lexy said and this time,a knock came from the door.''YEEARGH''Anais yelled and put on her ear fluffs and watch the televison without a sound.''Lexy go get the door''Nicole demanded while she was packing for the opened the door and gave the two persons a hug and those persons were Penny and Carrie.''hey girlfrend'' the duo said''guys,how are you doing''Lexy responed ''good,can you call Nicole please''asked Penny.''Sure'' Lexy said.''Mom,Penny and Carrie are here and Penny wants to tell you something''.''Alright sweety I am coming''Nicole said walking towards the door but what they dont know is that Gumball and Darwin are blazing down the stairs with speed and nothing else.''Penny,whats wron-wow how both of you reach down here in 2 seconds flat''Nicole asked confused''well we dont know'' the both of them said at the same time.''Ok penny,what you have to tell me''Nicole asked with a serious voice.''You have to go NOW, the plane is leaving in 45 minutes''Penny said in a strict voice.''Oh my lord thats 30 minutes away''Nicole said as dashed and grabbed her slightly awake husband and the luggage, threw them all in the car and drove off in high speed,without an officer seeing her.''well what now ''Carrie asked,felling slightily drowsy.''lets take a nap because its 15 minutes past 6 and we all had lots to do so lets slumber and we'll find something to eat tommorow''.''Great idea'' everyone said and they locked up the windows and doors and slowly climb up the stairs and go to their assigned rooms and fell asleep.

well guys,I hope you like the rewrite and I am so sorry about the first one

till the next chapter

Chewy out