Venom

by Some-Creature

Here we go with a little poetry...in English. I'm afraid there are some mistakes, so feel free to tell me about it in your reviews and just tell me what you think about it in general. Alors, c'est parti avec un petit poème...en Anglais (donc je l'ai écrit en anglais et je vous le traduis en français, comme ça tout le monde peut lire).Dites moi ce que vous en pensez.

1. Chapter 1

So I wrote that last night, I'm really not sure if it's good...You tell me. Guess who's talking :)

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The distinctive scent of his soft skin, I would recognize it in the middle of a sweaty crowd.

That much love bruises my head and my heart, my reason quit already.

What am I supposed to do but eat up the sweet pain which his sugar voice gives me.

That's all that life has to offer.

Suffer. Pain.

Search for the second at which a smile reaches your face as a cloudy day filled in with a colourful sun.

Actually there's nothing else right now.

Searching for that sugar breath.

I'd rather die that lose my scent because I need to access at least that part of his personality, I need it.

I don't deserve it.

I won't fight the pain that sickens my soul. I will only slightly caress the edge of my dreams and never wake up again.