Me: This is my first fan-fic so please tell me what I need to improve :P on

Disclaimer: I sadly don't own Pokémon. (Butt I own Hailey Flare and her Pokémon : P)


It was nine in the morning when Hailey Flare finally dragged herself out of bed, it was her thirteenth birthday and she was overdue to start her adventure around the hoenn region. Her vulpix sat at her door tapping its paw impatiently and staring up at her with big impatient orange eyes.

FLASHBACK:

A young brunette girl was crying softly on the forest floor, she was being teased at school again and had run off crying into a nearby forest 'why can't they just leave me alone?' she screamed mentally at herself. She had been in a spiralling depression for about a year now and often thought suicidal thoughts. A soft yelping jolted her out her thoughts, something could be heard from behind a tree so she stood up and softly tip-toed towards the noise. She was shocked at what she saw, a ninetails was lying in a pool of what she guessed was her own blood there was a slash mark up its side and it wore a ripped collar. "Hey there" she soothed softly as she crept towards it "its ok, your going to be fine" the ninetails weekly shook its head at her it lifted up a paw to reveal a beautiful bright orange egg. It pushed the egg to her with its snout and looked at her straight in the eye, its orange eyes pleaded with her and Hailey finally understood "oh" she spoke softly do you want me to look after this?" the ninetails smiled and nodded then took its last breath and died. Hailey came back the next day and buried it "don't worry ninetails" she promised "I promise I'll look after your baby"

A year later at the end of may the egg hatched into a beautiful baby girl vulpix with saffron yellow eyes so Hailey decided to name her saffy-may

END FLASHBACK:

"Morning saffs" saffy looked up her and smiled evilly "what are you planning?...ARGHGHH" saffy had jumped on her chest causing her to fall and then allowing saffy free access to lick her face "ha-ha ewwwwwwwwwwww saffy! Hailey giggled and stood up "right listen up saffs we're leaving today and we need to be serious!" saffy nodded and saluted at her "good now go downstairs and eat your breakfast I'll be down in a minute" saffy replied with an excited "vullllllllll-pix!" and bolted down the stairs.

Hailey giggled softly and sat down at her vanity table to brush back her hair into a ponytail it was straight and a very dark colour of brunette almost black .and her sky blue eyes and pale skin suited it nicely "hmm it will do" she said as she put on her red bandana and red shirt and dark red trousers then she put on her poke-ball belt and clipped saffy's ball to it.

She was supposed to start her journey three years ago with her best friend Steven stone but her dad died in a training accident and she needed to be home to comfort her mother, Steven had offered to wait but Hailey firmly said no and forced him to leave. She hadn't seen him since 'nope not even a phone call' she thought bitterly she knew she wasn't mad at him but just missed him a lot.

She ate her breakfast said a tearful goodbye to her mother and walked confidently out the front door 'So this is it!' she thought excitedly as she stood on the border to her town "well onwards to better things eh saffy" saffy smiled and replied with a soft "pixxxxxxxx"


i just want to thank you all in advance for reveiwing ;)

i am going to post some pictures of hailey and saffy on my deviantart page just be pateint beacause it may take a while (i have the memory of a fish :L )