Hi, this is my first fanfiction, it's about Edward punishing Bella. It will include spanking and other sexual scenes so young children should not read this. I hope you enjoy it and I would be really grateful if you could review to tell me whether to carry on or not or even to tell me if it's rubbish! Also if you have any ideas just review or PM me. Thanks.
Bella was very focused. Edward's lips touched hers as they passionately made love. His cold tongue drew closer to her clit. Suddenly Bella kicked him in the balls.
"How dare you" Edward cried.
"I wouldn't let you lick my clit, but I would let Jacob."
"WHAT THE FUCK!"
"Joking babes, get it there, good and strong"
Bella and Edward continued their sexual experience until Bella suddenly exclaimed
"Edward, I wanna serve you, I wanna be your slave, your sex slave."
"Er...what!?"
"I wanna be your slave. I will be good and take any punishment that you desire to inflict upon me."
"This really turns me on babes, but are you sure about this?"
"I am positive"
After their sex session, Bella was quietly reading in the corner, when Edward grabbed her and dragged her towards the cellar.
"Now Bella, you are going to have 7 days of slave training, this will involve torture, sex and submission." Edward's fierce erection was already bulging through his pants.
"yes master, Bella whimpered.
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Bella was tied face down to a table, her legs were stretched apart. Edward was circling her menacingly, whip in hand. He pulled his hand back to take the first stroke. With a distorted look on his face he thrashed her pale white buttocks which was now turning a cherry red.
"Nooooo" Bella wailed.
"You ask for it dear, so now you have to deal with the consequences"
"Fuck" she hissed.
"Look at me"
Bella turned her head towards her beloved only for her head to fly back in pain. Edward had just slapped her round the face. Sadness, humiliation and regret flooded her as she whispered
"How could you be so cruel to me Edward?"
"I will not tolerate swearing from my slaves" He replied coldly. He hurried away in anger.
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So there is the first chapter done, please R&R!!! Reviews are welcomed and I will be sure to reply to them all!