The Exile Chronicles

by Indraasil

Hounded by Bounty Hunters, a freelance pilot known as the Exile finds a new jump hole but after he goes through, he finds that he'd much rather deal with the Bounty Hunters. Major revision and rewrite taking place.

I've taken the chapters down. I'm in the middle of a major re-write of the entire story - although I haven't finished it. Hopefully it'll be a bit better.

Major Changes:

Fight scenes will have a total revision

New character concepts: Ryo's name will be changed, as well as a good deal of her personality (less likely to cry at the drop of a hat)

Exile will get a bit of a re-work to, and his name will be revealed later, I promise

The storyline will remain the same (sort of)

Chapters will be merged/lengthened - hopefully to an average of 2000 words per chapter (subject to change)

Background/sub-plot will have a major revision - less based on game experiences

Attempts at humour/innuendo shall be fixed/removed

Thanks to those of you who have reviewed, I'll get up the first chapter when I can.