SUPERNATURAL - AN ALTERNATE UNIVERSE - EPISODE 1: THE REWRITTEN PILOT


Author's note:

'Supernatural - An Alternate Universe' is a set of stories that rewrite Supernatural. Not that I don't love the show as is, because I'm pretty obsessed. This is just a version that's been in my head for awhile and I've decided to share it.

If I mention or rewrite parts of episodes, I will warn you at the beginnings of each story. I'm going to try not (but can't promise) to totally rewrite a whole episode (except for maybe 'The Pilot'). That would be repetitive and boring and I really hope anything I do rewrite won't be. I will be writing in a narrative form, which will allow me to explore what characters are thinking and feeling. It will also allow me to elaborate on certain details.

So, what is the same? John Winchester hunts because of Mary's death in Sam's nursery. Dean, who carried Sam out of the nursery, was trained to follow in his father's footsteps. Sam was trained too, but rebelled and went to Stanford.

Demons and angels exist.

So, what's different? Most of that will be explained throughout the series. The major thing is that Bobby Singer has a daughter, Jane. She is two years younger than Dean and two years older than Sam, which makes her twenty-four at the time of 'The Rewritten Pilot'. She grew up with the brothers, as their fathers worked together, and eventually became romantically involved with Dean. Although Bobby trained Jane to be a hunter, he made sure she had as normal a childhood as possible.

Jane looks a lot like her mother, Karen Singer. She is blonde and around the same height, 5' 7". She has Bobby's eyes - bluish gray - and a more athletic build than either parent.

That's all I can say here. Except, I'm new at writing action scenes. I'm better with dialogue and feelings. I do hope you enjoy the story, even if it may be a bit slow paced. Comments and reviews are appreciated and, of course, I don't own Supernatural or it's characters.

Lastly, to be safe, in case I write in sex scenes, all stories will have an 'M' rating.