Hey guys well dis is me first Yu-Yu fic so please be nice!! ^ -^ tank ye!!
Hee almost forgots da disclaimer well I don't own Yu-Yu so don't sue!!
Thoughts
"Talking"
Narration * Hiei's Inner Voice*
BOTAN
I can't believe I'm stuck. in a movie theater. with HIEI!! I mean come on why couldn't I have taken someone else to the movies. oh yea nobody was free. but why HIEI?!?! I mean how did this even happen.
FLASHBACK NO ONE'S POV!!
FLASHBACK: "Hiei please come to the movies with me!!" "HELL NO!!, why are you even asking me?" Hiei yelled down to Botan from his tree. Botan's lavender eyes started to fill with tears, "But Hiei everyone is busy and this is my only day off *sniff* and I wanna go to the movies!! *sob sob* "Alright come on lets go" * Later * "No women you are not making me watch Bunnies in Love!!!" Hiei was screaming and kicking but Botan would not let go of her death grip. "Oh come on Hiei, this movie is gonna be great!!" Botan finally gets Hiei into the theater, and Hiei falls asleep about three minutes into the movie. * Later * It's near closing time and Botan can't get Hiei to wake up. "Darn it Hiei, WAKE UP!!!" Botan hears the owners leaving and doors locking, she's tempted to leave, but she can't just brush off Hiei. About thirty minutes later Hiei wakes up. END FLASHBACK
HIEI
Ok, so im stuck with the ferry girl. in a movie theater. because I fell asleep. DAMN SLEEPING HABITS!! Well no need to hang out with her, I mean there is a whole movie theater to roam in, yup I see no need to stay here. "I have no desire to stay with you and longer than necessary, so stay out of my way till we leave." Botan, clearly angry, says, "Fine Hiei, you fricked up demon, I won't stay with you then!!" "Hn" What a weak attempt to insult me. Hn, I should be going now.
BOTAN
How dare he say that to me!! Well fine I don't need a mean demon to protect me; I'm perfectly fine on my own!! Oh, dear I hate the dark I wish I knew where some lights were. ok I'm officially freaking out. "HIEI YOU BAKA WAIT FOR ME!!!!" Dang where did he go, don't tell me he left.
HIEI
Hn, stupid girl. hehe might as well scare her. "Are you looking for someone?" "HOLY CRAP!!" shit Hiei, that was a bad idea, now your ears are permanently damaged. bad bad idea. "Hiei don't do that!!" "Hn" stupid girl she can't order me around. "Ok Hiei, I'm scared don't leave me ok, ok I'M SO SCARED!!" Botan latches onto Hiei's arm and refuses to let go. "Damn onna (A/N im not sure if that's how you use this word but I've read it so im usin' it!! ^ ^) Let go your cutting off my circulation!!" damn happy women get off my arm, I don't like to be touched!!! *Inner voice: but shes so warm and cute. I like warm and cute* Shut up inner voice I HATE warm and cute!! *Inner voice: no you don't. I know cause we're the same person!!*.
BOTAN
This is ok, I'm latched on the Hiei's arm and that's kind of a bad thing, but you know it's all-good. I mean I'd rather be on someone else's arm but hey at least im not scared anymore. Plus Hiei's whole body is nice and cool and I just loved his arm muscles oh yeah, loving the arm muscles. Botan starts to unconsciously stroke Hiei's arm. "Onna what the hell do you think your doing?!?!?!" huh what's he talking about I'm just enjoying this nice muscle. wait muscle. Hiei's muscle?? "Oh hell, I'm sorry Hiei, but your muscle and the coldness. I couldn't resist; well you really have a nice body ya know?" Did I just see Hiei blush.? BLUSH?!?! .
HIEI
Am I fucking blushing, cause SHE said my body was nice? . Hell no. well maybe. *Inner voice: your blushing your blushing just admit it your blushing!!* HELL NO!! *Inner voice: well then. admit you liked it when she was rubbing your arm.* well maybe a little. *Inner voice: yup I knew it your attracted to her. yup yup I knew it* Damn it will you shut up!! I'M NOT ATRACKED!!. Maybe just a little, but if a pretty *Inner voice: oh you said she was pretty.* whatever if a pretty girl was rubbing your arm I'm sure you would be a little attracted too!!! Damn I'm going soft.
BOTAN
Ok, so maybe he was blushing. oh well im way too tired to think about it now. Maybe I'll just take a little snooze, not for to long. oh I'm loving the coldness. oh yeah.
HIEI
Botan was asleep, and was now latched/leaning on to/into Hiei's upper body. I don't need that asshole of an inner voice to tell me I'm blushing, I can tell my face is burning. and I HATE it!! Damn ferry girl had to go and sleep all over me!! Maybe I should just lay her down over on a wall somewhere, yeah then I can leave. and FINALLY be by myself!! Hn. ok now she's on the wall. but I'm getting a little sleepy. maybe I'll just lay down here for a few moments. * LATER * Mnmnm. God that feels good. hmhmhm. Sometime during the night Botan had managed to get her head in Hiei's lap and her arms around his stomach, now she's stoking his abs and chest in her sleep.
BOTAN
Mnmnm. nice muscle, yes, nice hard muscle. Botan loves the muscle. Loves the Hiei muscles. hmhmhm.
HIEI
Who the hell is rubbing my abs.? Holy SHIT!! It's Botan!! I'm gonna wake her up and kill her for this!! *Inner voice: oh no!! Wait I'm enjoying this!!* Hn, she's mumbling something. I wonder. "Oh Hiei you know I just love your body. hmm. yup I always liked you ya know. I just never wanted you to know . yup yup always liked you. but now I think I may. just." JUST WHAT WOMEN!! Come on say something, I must know!! Wait, why do I want to know, I mean I don't even like her. do I? *Inner voice: you don't like her.* See I knew it!! *Inner voice: you love her.* NO I DON'T!!. Do I? "Yup Hiei. I may just. love ya. good thing your 'sleep cause if you were awake you would've killed me by now".
BOTAN
Glad that's done, I've finally confessed how I feel!! I mean I knew I was attracted to Hiei, who wouldn't be? Yet, ever since we've been locked up in here. I mean I always get this warm fuzzy feeling inside when he's near me. Of course I was mad at him once in a while but it would be boring if we just got along. yup I love him, I know on the inside he's not that bad of a guy!! "I Botan, blue-haired happy ferry girl, loves you (points at Hiei) Hiei Jagenshi" (A.N sorry if that's not his last name but I remember seeing something like it in another fic.).
HIEI
SHE LOVES ME!! Why do I feel so happy about it I should be chopping her limb from limb!! *Inner voice: cause you love her love her admit it!!* Let me think about this. I'll admit she is a very beautiful person, and not too bad to hang around, and even though her perkiness is annoying. I can deal with it. Since we've been locked in this damned place I get this unknown feeling inside of my heart every time we touch or when I'm near her. maybe it is love? But do I really love her?. "I, Hiei, antisocial fire demon, loves you (points at Botan) Botan" (A/N I don't know her last name - _ -)
BOTAN
Damn!! I didn't know he was awake!! Ok now is the time to think of a good excuse. WAIT!! Did he just say he loved me??? HE DID!!!
NO POV!!
Hiei grabs Botan's shoulders and looks her in the eye, "I love you Botan" and Botan replies, "And I love you too Hiei" Hiei grabs her into a gentle kiss full of passion, lust, and an new-found emotion. love.
Ok end of story!! Sorry if it was confusing!! It's just that I like to have stories with different points of views, but this was my first time trying it!! Please review and be honest I really want to know if there is something in my writing I can improve!! Flames will be used to warm my ass!! ^ _ ^ Bye
Thoughts
"Talking"
Narration * Hiei's Inner Voice*
BOTAN
I can't believe I'm stuck. in a movie theater. with HIEI!! I mean come on why couldn't I have taken someone else to the movies. oh yea nobody was free. but why HIEI?!?! I mean how did this even happen.
FLASHBACK NO ONE'S POV!!
FLASHBACK: "Hiei please come to the movies with me!!" "HELL NO!!, why are you even asking me?" Hiei yelled down to Botan from his tree. Botan's lavender eyes started to fill with tears, "But Hiei everyone is busy and this is my only day off *sniff* and I wanna go to the movies!! *sob sob* "Alright come on lets go" * Later * "No women you are not making me watch Bunnies in Love!!!" Hiei was screaming and kicking but Botan would not let go of her death grip. "Oh come on Hiei, this movie is gonna be great!!" Botan finally gets Hiei into the theater, and Hiei falls asleep about three minutes into the movie. * Later * It's near closing time and Botan can't get Hiei to wake up. "Darn it Hiei, WAKE UP!!!" Botan hears the owners leaving and doors locking, she's tempted to leave, but she can't just brush off Hiei. About thirty minutes later Hiei wakes up. END FLASHBACK
HIEI
Ok, so im stuck with the ferry girl. in a movie theater. because I fell asleep. DAMN SLEEPING HABITS!! Well no need to hang out with her, I mean there is a whole movie theater to roam in, yup I see no need to stay here. "I have no desire to stay with you and longer than necessary, so stay out of my way till we leave." Botan, clearly angry, says, "Fine Hiei, you fricked up demon, I won't stay with you then!!" "Hn" What a weak attempt to insult me. Hn, I should be going now.
BOTAN
How dare he say that to me!! Well fine I don't need a mean demon to protect me; I'm perfectly fine on my own!! Oh, dear I hate the dark I wish I knew where some lights were. ok I'm officially freaking out. "HIEI YOU BAKA WAIT FOR ME!!!!" Dang where did he go, don't tell me he left.
HIEI
Hn, stupid girl. hehe might as well scare her. "Are you looking for someone?" "HOLY CRAP!!" shit Hiei, that was a bad idea, now your ears are permanently damaged. bad bad idea. "Hiei don't do that!!" "Hn" stupid girl she can't order me around. "Ok Hiei, I'm scared don't leave me ok, ok I'M SO SCARED!!" Botan latches onto Hiei's arm and refuses to let go. "Damn onna (A/N im not sure if that's how you use this word but I've read it so im usin' it!! ^ ^) Let go your cutting off my circulation!!" damn happy women get off my arm, I don't like to be touched!!! *Inner voice: but shes so warm and cute. I like warm and cute* Shut up inner voice I HATE warm and cute!! *Inner voice: no you don't. I know cause we're the same person!!*.
BOTAN
This is ok, I'm latched on the Hiei's arm and that's kind of a bad thing, but you know it's all-good. I mean I'd rather be on someone else's arm but hey at least im not scared anymore. Plus Hiei's whole body is nice and cool and I just loved his arm muscles oh yeah, loving the arm muscles. Botan starts to unconsciously stroke Hiei's arm. "Onna what the hell do you think your doing?!?!?!" huh what's he talking about I'm just enjoying this nice muscle. wait muscle. Hiei's muscle?? "Oh hell, I'm sorry Hiei, but your muscle and the coldness. I couldn't resist; well you really have a nice body ya know?" Did I just see Hiei blush.? BLUSH?!?! .
HIEI
Am I fucking blushing, cause SHE said my body was nice? . Hell no. well maybe. *Inner voice: your blushing your blushing just admit it your blushing!!* HELL NO!! *Inner voice: well then. admit you liked it when she was rubbing your arm.* well maybe a little. *Inner voice: yup I knew it your attracted to her. yup yup I knew it* Damn it will you shut up!! I'M NOT ATRACKED!!. Maybe just a little, but if a pretty *Inner voice: oh you said she was pretty.* whatever if a pretty girl was rubbing your arm I'm sure you would be a little attracted too!!! Damn I'm going soft.
BOTAN
Ok, so maybe he was blushing. oh well im way too tired to think about it now. Maybe I'll just take a little snooze, not for to long. oh I'm loving the coldness. oh yeah.
HIEI
Botan was asleep, and was now latched/leaning on to/into Hiei's upper body. I don't need that asshole of an inner voice to tell me I'm blushing, I can tell my face is burning. and I HATE it!! Damn ferry girl had to go and sleep all over me!! Maybe I should just lay her down over on a wall somewhere, yeah then I can leave. and FINALLY be by myself!! Hn. ok now she's on the wall. but I'm getting a little sleepy. maybe I'll just lay down here for a few moments. * LATER * Mnmnm. God that feels good. hmhmhm. Sometime during the night Botan had managed to get her head in Hiei's lap and her arms around his stomach, now she's stoking his abs and chest in her sleep.
BOTAN
Mnmnm. nice muscle, yes, nice hard muscle. Botan loves the muscle. Loves the Hiei muscles. hmhmhm.
HIEI
Who the hell is rubbing my abs.? Holy SHIT!! It's Botan!! I'm gonna wake her up and kill her for this!! *Inner voice: oh no!! Wait I'm enjoying this!!* Hn, she's mumbling something. I wonder. "Oh Hiei you know I just love your body. hmm. yup I always liked you ya know. I just never wanted you to know . yup yup always liked you. but now I think I may. just." JUST WHAT WOMEN!! Come on say something, I must know!! Wait, why do I want to know, I mean I don't even like her. do I? *Inner voice: you don't like her.* See I knew it!! *Inner voice: you love her.* NO I DON'T!!. Do I? "Yup Hiei. I may just. love ya. good thing your 'sleep cause if you were awake you would've killed me by now".
BOTAN
Glad that's done, I've finally confessed how I feel!! I mean I knew I was attracted to Hiei, who wouldn't be? Yet, ever since we've been locked up in here. I mean I always get this warm fuzzy feeling inside when he's near me. Of course I was mad at him once in a while but it would be boring if we just got along. yup I love him, I know on the inside he's not that bad of a guy!! "I Botan, blue-haired happy ferry girl, loves you (points at Hiei) Hiei Jagenshi" (A.N sorry if that's not his last name but I remember seeing something like it in another fic.).
HIEI
SHE LOVES ME!! Why do I feel so happy about it I should be chopping her limb from limb!! *Inner voice: cause you love her love her admit it!!* Let me think about this. I'll admit she is a very beautiful person, and not too bad to hang around, and even though her perkiness is annoying. I can deal with it. Since we've been locked in this damned place I get this unknown feeling inside of my heart every time we touch or when I'm near her. maybe it is love? But do I really love her?. "I, Hiei, antisocial fire demon, loves you (points at Botan) Botan" (A/N I don't know her last name - _ -)
BOTAN
Damn!! I didn't know he was awake!! Ok now is the time to think of a good excuse. WAIT!! Did he just say he loved me??? HE DID!!!
NO POV!!
Hiei grabs Botan's shoulders and looks her in the eye, "I love you Botan" and Botan replies, "And I love you too Hiei" Hiei grabs her into a gentle kiss full of passion, lust, and an new-found emotion. love.
Ok end of story!! Sorry if it was confusing!! It's just that I like to have stories with different points of views, but this was my first time trying it!! Please review and be honest I really want to know if there is something in my writing I can improve!! Flames will be used to warm my ass!! ^ _ ^ Bye