Here you go, hopefully, this one will actually work! Sorry about the two failed attempts. There are no reviews that I can respond to yet. I am trying to publish one chapter per week or more.
A small group of cat gathered around a silver pool of water gleaming with the bright stars that seemed to sit around the cats.
A blue she-cat looked up, her eyes bright with hope in the dark times, "there is a prophecy," She murmured, not needing to greet anyone, "The scarlet sun will shine as the trees will bleed and the leopard will fall."
"It is about Scarletkit!" A pure white tom said his amber eyes shining, "They will save our land!" He looked over to a golden tom sitting next to the blue she-cat, "What do you think?"
The golden tom thought for a moment, "We don't know if it is about the Scarletkit in Thunderclan or Windclan," He said with a calm ambience, "We will need to tell Lavenderclaw and Guardheart, so they can help the kits."
The blue she-cat flicked her tail at the two others, "Go and tell them and report back to me," She said turning and walking away into the fields.
There ya go! Question time!
1. Did ya like it?
2. Was it good?
3. Is there anything I can do to make it better?
4. Are you ok with Starkit being Scarletkit now?
See ya~!
~Dawnshade49~