A/n May I ask what I am doing wrong how come no one reads this fic please
if some one will please tell me if you are reading this I just don't get it
I would update more and make longer chaps if I thought it was worth it but
seeing no one barely reads it why should I put more effort in it all and
all I think it is a good fic if you look over the Sp And Grammar I am
getting better though ask my good friends Black speed mistress if you do
not believe me review gimme pointers and tell me why you are not liking it
" What wait he was the one making fun of Harry" " Yes him and Harry don't get along well I hope you being both there sister will stop that now I must bid you a good bye" " Good bye Salzar Raun" She gave them both big hugs and walked out of the room and met up with Harry and took him back to the train waving good bye to all of her ancestors.
Back to where we were
" So now do you get it"? " Yes I do, it is really cool that I have a sis" " You know you're not my only Brother" " You mean I have another brother" " No I am sure that some one told you how mom got pregnant with me right?" " Yah" " Well that death eater was Lucius Malfoy Making Draco Malfoy my Brother but not yours" " Dang it sucks to be you" ' Yah or does it Maybe Draco is one of the Order I will go take a look and see if he is a worthy person of it then I will go check out more people and for the next week I will be watching them for the Qualities the only one I will not watch for is getting along because that can change' Kat thought silently " Well I am going to go get ready you may tell Ron and Mione about me you and Draco but the rest is to stay secret until said alright" " Yep talk to you later sis" He said Giving her a Big Hagrid hug
Kat open the door to the compartment and told Ron and Hermione who where talking to the kid with the frog that they could go back in but while she talk to them she noticed a faint glow in there eyes 'they must be worthy people for me to keep an eye on' She also noticed a girl that was talk animatedly with them had the same bright glow 'she looks a lot like Ron she must be his sis another worthy so far that is three one more it must be Draco it has to be' she walked into the next compartment and saw here other brother " Awe Draco may I have a word?" She asked innocently and also noticed that glow 'yes'
" What wait he was the one making fun of Harry" " Yes him and Harry don't get along well I hope you being both there sister will stop that now I must bid you a good bye" " Good bye Salzar Raun" She gave them both big hugs and walked out of the room and met up with Harry and took him back to the train waving good bye to all of her ancestors.
Back to where we were
" So now do you get it"? " Yes I do, it is really cool that I have a sis" " You know you're not my only Brother" " You mean I have another brother" " No I am sure that some one told you how mom got pregnant with me right?" " Yah" " Well that death eater was Lucius Malfoy Making Draco Malfoy my Brother but not yours" " Dang it sucks to be you" ' Yah or does it Maybe Draco is one of the Order I will go take a look and see if he is a worthy person of it then I will go check out more people and for the next week I will be watching them for the Qualities the only one I will not watch for is getting along because that can change' Kat thought silently " Well I am going to go get ready you may tell Ron and Mione about me you and Draco but the rest is to stay secret until said alright" " Yep talk to you later sis" He said Giving her a Big Hagrid hug
Kat open the door to the compartment and told Ron and Hermione who where talking to the kid with the frog that they could go back in but while she talk to them she noticed a faint glow in there eyes 'they must be worthy people for me to keep an eye on' She also noticed a girl that was talk animatedly with them had the same bright glow 'she looks a lot like Ron she must be his sis another worthy so far that is three one more it must be Draco it has to be' she walked into the next compartment and saw here other brother " Awe Draco may I have a word?" She asked innocently and also noticed that glow 'yes'