Hello! I wanted to try something different here. This is the first Choose Your Own Fanfiction! Well, that I know of at least. For the people who don't know what a "Choose Your Own Adventure" book is, it is basically just what it sounds like. The reader makes decisions that will determine how the story will go. Because of this, however, you CAN NOT read this from beginning to end. Well, you could, but it would be so confusing. Please let me know what you think of the story.
This Fanfiction is based on Nose dive fan 01 (no spaces) story called "The Great Mouse Detective: Sucked In" Jade was originally made by her. I do not own her or anything of the Great Mouse Detective.
My name is Jade Thomony and, personally, I believe I'm just like any normal fourteen-about-to-turn-fifteen year old girl. Well, except for my love for cartoon movies. I love to watch them, but I never had much of a chance to until Mom went to bed, and that was usually around 8.
That changed on June 25th.
I stepped out of my room at about noon, which wasn't that unusual. After all, it's June, and it just so happens to be a Saturday. What was unusual was that my mom was waiting at my door when I stepped out.
"Um, hi. What's up?" Mom just smiled.
"Oh, nothing. I just need you to do me a favor."
"Sureā¦" I answered, uncertainty slipping out.
"Would you mind staying out of your room for about an hour?"
I let out a somewhat board yawn. "Fine, no problem. I'm getting breakfast, anyway." Not really feeling up to trying to cook something, I decided to fix myself a bowl of cereal. When I finished eating, Mom's "time limit" still wasn't up, so I pulled out a book I'd left in the living room, The Great Mouse Detective, and read until she finally came in.
"All right, it's all yours again." I cocked my eyebrow, wondering what my mom was up to. I sat up and walked into my room. I excitedly gasped when I saw a TV, DVD, and really old looking VCR player had been set up in my room.
"Oh, wow Mom! Thank you so much!" I spun around and hugged her. "I'm going to test it out!" I excitedly ran into the living room after some of my favorite movies. I spent most of the rest of the day watching DVDs. Finally I decided to test the VCR. I picked up the Great Mouse Detective and slid it inside. An image of London appeared on the screen, followed by the words London 1897. I was just about to sit back when I heard the VCR make a popping sound.
Everything froze. I had two options and I had to act fast.
1) Hurry and take the tape out. The VCR is obviously old and it is probably going to destroy my tape if I don't get it out now. I'll be losing one of my most favorite movies!
2) On the other hand, this might just be a normal sound for this VCR. As I thought before, it is old. This might just be a noise I'll have to get used to.
This sped through my mind. When time resumed, I-
What does Jade do?
If Jade goes to take the tape out, go to Choice 1.
If Jade waits to see what happens, o to Choice 2
Yeah, yeah, I know. "Chapter 1" is really short here. This is a work in progress. Hopefully, I'll be able to post the choices every 2 weeks. Anyway, hope you guys will enjoy this story. This first set of choices will be up soon. Let me know what you think by review or commenting. Oh, and check out the original!
