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Intro
"Here its legend Kagome in the land of" "save your breath gramps, do you remember what tomorrow is?" "Sigh, could I ever forget my adorable grand daughter's birthday" "WOW for me" "it's a day early but happy birthday Kagome":-/ "It's a mummified foot of a 'Kanto' air sprit the legend says" "here Buyo lunch" "do you know what that cost" Hi I'm Kagome Hirigahsi(sp) and tomorrow is my fifteenth birthday tomorrow. My house is a old shrine that has been in my family for centuries I live in Harajuku with my mom, grandpa, and my little brother. Wow it'll be 5yrs since the accident What where am I ow my head hurts ok calm down lets start easy my name is Kagome good that seems right ok I am in a hospital its mostly white the sheets are clean and I am 10yrs old I live in where do I live yawn so tiered maybe ill just rest a bit. Hello earth to Kags time for school "what ever twerp, bye mom, and gramps love you.
-----------------------6th period math------------------------
so boring cant stay awake no must fight no "ZZZZZZZZZZ" "kagome" "ZZZZZZZZ" "KAGOME" "ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ" KAGOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMME" "ahhhhh the answer is 2" she fell on the floor. "well you can find the answer in detention on Thursday" "yes Mis.Shouga"
----------Lunch----------
"Hey Sango what's up?"
"nothing you"
"nothing Ms. Shouga gave me a detention again I hate math"
"so what about your birthday?"
" oh you know the same thing as ever a sleep over w/ the girls."
" yeah I got you the best present ever. It is so gorgeous. Hey look itsEri, Arimi, and Yuka(aka the girls)
"hi"they said in unison (their slightly creepy)
"hi, giggle, sango, giggle, kagome "
"what's so funny yo.." suddenly she felt some ones hand on her a$$ SLAP
"miroku what the hell was that for I can't belive you would do this again you perve don't ever do that again" all the while hitting him repeatedly miroku tried to sneak away
-------Walking home from school-------
" did you see the new fruits basket episode." "of course kyo is so hot." "Yeah I know but we both know who owns him." "yeah" together san and kags say "me" "what he's mine no stop copying me" they both burst out laughing " ok bye kags this is my street." "ok call me bye."
Kagome starts humming a strange song she vaguely remembered when she heard a rustle in a nearby bush what in the world is that noise another rustle was made from the bush " who is there" no answer. "hello" this time there was a whimper kagome slowly crept to the bush and saw
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