I thought I would just add a more of an ending to this chapter.

Hey I'm back and this one is going to be better than my first published story. And even to me, I can tell it sucks.

I'm working on different parts of the story at once, don't ask me why, I just am.

If I don't update for a while, it's either because that I can't get online, I have tennis, or it's just school. (was out for week. ALOT of hmwk to do D: )

Disclaimer: I do not own Warriors

"Hey!" a white colored tom yowled, playfully.

"What? You deserved it!" an orange-flame colored she-cat hissed back, playfully.

"Icepaw! Marigoldpaw! Stop fooling around, and pay attention!" a red-ginger colored tom growled.

"Sorry Foxleap," both apprentice mumbled at the same time.

"I should hope so. Now, watch what Eaglepaw does," Foxleap ordered.

Icepaw and Marigoldpaw sat still and watched Eaglepaw stalk a mouse. Eaglepaw found where the mouse was and moved so he was downwind of the mouse. He lowered him-self into a hunter's crouch, and slowly crawled forward, as lightly as he could. When he was sure the he was close enough, he pounced. The mouse sensed that Eaglepaw was there and ran away, but Eaglepaw was faster. He landed on it and killed it with a quick snip on the back of the neck. He picked up the mouse and trotted back over to the group.

"Well done," Foxleap congratulated his apprentice.

"Show off," Marigoldpaw hissed, playfully at Eaglepaw.

The sand colored apprentice dropped his mouse, and sat down next to Marigoldpaw. "Hey, he's the one who told you to watch, not me," he answered back, smiling.

"Ok, then let's see you do it Marigoldpaw," Foxleap meowed, a hint of amusement in his voice.

Marigoldpaw padded forward, scenting for prey. Eaglepaw watched her, amusement flooding his eyes. He looked at Icepaw, who was watched her like a hawk. Oh, Starclan, he thought, rolling his eyes. He looked back at Marigoldpaw and saw that she was about to pounce on something. She pounced, and when she picked her head back up, she had a vole hanging from her jaws.

"Well done," Foxleap meowed, happily, as Marigoldpaw padded back, sitting back down between Eaglepaw and Icepaw. "Icepaw, it's your turn now."

Icepaw padded forward and scented for prey. He located a vole and in no time, he was back in his spot, with a vole lying in front of him.

"Nice job," Foxleap commented, nodding to Icepaw. He, then, looked at all 3 of them. "Now I want you to try and bring back, each, three pieces of prey. I'll take what you have now back to camp with me," he meowed. All three apprentices nodded in acknowledgement.

"Good luck," Foxleap meowed, looking back at them, as he padded back to camp, with the apprentices' prey.

By the time Eaglepaw was back, it was about sun-high. He had caught one mouse and two squirrels. He padded into camp, carrying his prey and dropped it on the fresh-kill pile. He looked around for his mentor, and saw Foxleap sharing tongues with Rosepetal. He quickly trotted over to him. "Foxleap?" he asked.

"Yes?" the red-ginger colored tom asked.

"Can I go hunting with Frostpaw?" he asked, glancing at Rosepetal.

"Fine with me," Foxleap meowed. He turned to look at Rosepetal.

"It's ok with me," she meowed.

"Well, I guess that's–" Foxleap didn't even get to finish his sentence, because Eaglepaw was already bounding over to the apprentices' den.

["Well, he seems very enthusiastic to spend time with Frostpaw," Foxleap purred with amusement.

"I know. Looks like there already is love in the air," Rosepetal chuckled.]

When Eaglepaw got to the apprentices' den, he poked his head inside. "Frostpaw?" he called. "Frostpaw, you here?"

"Yes," a voice said. The voice surprised/scared Eaglepaw and he jumped, hitting his head on the stone wall. "Ow!" he hissed. He pulled his head back out to see who said it. As he expected, it was Frostpaw. She was giggling.

"What'd did you do? Accidentally hit your head?" the white-greyish she-cat giggled.

"I'll show you accidentally!" Eaglepaw hissed playfully. He pounced onto Frostpaw, claws sheathed.

"Hey!" she hissed. They rolled around in front of the apprentices' den, until Frostpaw was able to pin Eaglepaw to the ground. "As I said, 'accccciiiiideeennnnntaaallll lyyyyyyyy,'" she purred. She jumped off and Eaglepaw stood up, shaking the dirt out of his pelt.

"Wanna go hunting?" Eaglepaw asked.

She rolled her eyes. "Ok, fine," she meowed, smirking, and then she raced out of camp, with Eaglepaw running after her.

As they passed the camp entrance, Eaglepaw meowed, "I wanna try to have a hunt that doesn't end in play fighting!"

Frostpaw looked back, flashing him a mischievous look, and smirked. "I'm not promising anything!" she warned.

When they got back, they had collected two huge piles of prey, which took four trips to get all of it to camp.

As they dropped their last pieces of prey on the fresh-kill pile, their mentors padded up to them. "Great job, both of you!" Foxleap congratulated them, "you deserve a feast!"

Eaglepaw and Frostpaw both purred. Eaglepaw took a squirrel padded over to the apprentices' den. He layed down and saw Frostpaw padding over with a thrush in her jaws. She layed down next to him, pulling the feathers of her prey and setting them into a pile.

"So, what do you want to do after we finish eating?" Frostpaw asked.

"I don't know," Eaglepaw meowed, "wanna go for a walk?"

"Ok, just let me finish eating," she meowed, finishing her thrush.

Eaglepaw finished his squirrel, buried the remains, and stood up. Frostpaw buried her remains, and took the feathers over to the nursery. She padded back out and they padded into the forest.

Well, that's the first chapter. So, what you think?
I have tennis EVERYDAY(including weekends)D: after school, and alot of games, so, updating will be staggered.
Constructive Criticism is appreciated!