Trailer:
Shows the happy couple, holding hands walking down the beach…
Shane: babe, are you okay? You've been really distant lately!
Mitchie: yea, I'm fine; I just have a bit of a headache!
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Shows Mitchie in bed…
Shane: Mitch, I think you should really go to the doctor, you've been getting sicker!
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Shows Mitchie coming out of the doctors and getting into her car with tears in her eyes…
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Shane: you…what?
Shows Shane get in his car and drive away… leaving Mitchie in tears.
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Nate: Mitchie, Shane's missing!
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Shows Mitchie coming out of the hospital…
Mitchie: I can't take it anymore, I need Shane.
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A/N. So what do you think? My first FF so please bare with me…
Constructive Criticism is most greatly appreciated.
Also I don't know how long this story is going to be!
Sorry this is really short I didn't want to give too much away in case I give up on this story!
Do you think I should continue and if not what kind of story do you recommend that I write?
Love Ashlee